Quiet Poetry Lounge : DANGEROUS MIND

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Aug 19, 2005.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Confusion cries
    illusion unexplain
    mindful notions
    trying to stay sane
    dangerously taken
    consumed by name
    cross between
    flicked deep pain
    deadly departure
    and evil hot flame
    lost consciousness
    slavery yet tame

    Da mindz of creed
    for the greed
    still they feed
    destructional breed
    stumbling through da
    technicolor of life
    and struggling poverty
    straying beyond
    control da mind detour
    in belief of massa way

    existing da vocabulary
    weave into street slain
    bashing the structure
    of humankind brain
    making a dangerous
    mind get lost and insane
    reflection i see of me
    the mirror image i know not

    Dangerous desires lure
    like none thinking a cure
    ending hope and dreamz
    replace wit hollow screamz
    nameless follies and schemes
    to keep da mind in disorder
    now the heart digest
    what da mind left ova
    galloping for hope & luck
    searching for da clover

    earthly bound mindz
    now underground frustration
    has become my pet peeve.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice. You listed well what they do. To trip up the mind. With the plan of no let up in time. Get off our back. We can see thru that. It's whack. The line.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    you know Hodee they study our emotions
    and thinking and use it against us and we
    fall into the slave mindset get lost from our
    true culture and creed , become slaves upon
    each other for destruction which make da mind
    as dangerous as ever ...
    We kill, steal and destroy
    they laugh and jump for joy
    Thankz bruh for the visit in my head

    what a pat peeve
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ it's deep. But I enjoyed sharing the truth you spoke.

    The real truth and I read it before. paraphased : becuse I don't recall the other country. It said war came out of Rome. But out of Africa came love.

    The article I may have bookmarked. These are the things thrust into the world. So they must keep us from love.

    Some how I think that is why Martin Luther was so powerful using it. Because Gandi knows it, Martin knows it and the devil can't stand it. I'm going to come back to visit this post several times. next time bring with me my Dangerous Mind. Cause if they wan't it. I like Obliging.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What better for those who hate us, to see us destroy ourselves? Your pen is on fire with these messages for our minds. Flow on.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sure thing brutha , i know we hold the
    higher power to use love at a great need
    every bit stolen become as dangerous
    to the lost mindz ........do share it !
     
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    yes watz it is a dangerous thought and they have use it
    to destroy us our unity what we have and the love we share
    da mind become trap in the mist of their thinking and greed
    we become inslaved and destructional to ourselves
    dangerous mindz is my pet peeve.
     
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    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that's what i like about your poetry; you are able to convey your thoughts/feelings on a certain topic while only using like THREE/FOUR words per line...lol...AMAZING...and still ONE is able to grasp your thoughts and emotions
     
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    thank you Mzpoetic ya words means so much to me and my learning
    ability to poetry and it's art thank u so much sista queen
     
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    Make NOISE for Mister R-I-C to the H.Hey yo *****,take the mic again and put ya flow down man,we feel it!
    Mmm,sing also for our brothers in California 'cuz the 2 gangs there are making so much desasters.
    The east side wants the peace in West coast.
    One day,Queens will be a sweet place where to live!All my fellas of New York,i do believe in u,i do believe in ur skills,put down guns and hug eachother.
    Da street voice
     
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