Black Poetry : Danger of my green :wink:

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by moham, Sep 24, 2004.

  1. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OOOh they say im selfish
    And mighty jealous too
    Now tell me baby is it so wrong
    All I want is you

    Im not gonna hide it
    Or even rationalize it
    And no, not even fight it
    Cause this is just me

    Let me protect you
    Never will neglect you
    Will always respect you
    Cause thats love to me

    I wish you could be a princess
    And i a prince for once
    Would lock you up high
    In this tower,
    And hope you wouldn’t jump :grin:

    Or maybe I would shoot :uzi:
    You in your left foot
    I’m not scared
    you’ll walk away
    but this is just my way
    To make you stay

    If I could be a man
    We could drink a beer :toast:
    Together watch some sports
    I could keep you here

    Cause I want to be your lady
    I want to be your friend
    I want to be everything
    From now until the end

    Oooh baby they say I’m selfish
    And might jealous too
    Well is it soo bad
    All I want is you
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    ok...i didn't get the title at first...
    but i get it now...
    good rhythm and rhymes...
    btw...you don't have to be a man to drink a brew ;)
    one love
    khasm
     
  3. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :gossip: Yep I got it, tyte drop
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    selfishly lovely...
    nice work poet!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We want what we want, if that's selfish, oh well. But I don't think it is in this case, I think it's just knowing what you want. Strong vibe here.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    all for self thinking dis was on point !
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was craft tight....i feel ya...
     
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    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Definately getting the good vibe from this. Love sometimes is about being selfish.. You're just proving how hard you love. Lovely!
     
  9. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi guys,

    I was really really......really surprised that I got 7 replies, cause I never expected it!! I wasn't sure if you were going to like this piece, but I posted it anyways.
    I'm glad you guys liked it, there's one thing though!!
    :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: "I tried to be funny"
    I don't know if guys had to even smile a lil bit about the piece....I wonder....(not even a lil smile????).......

    But
    Khasm (we could drink a brew together :wink: ), TheOne, Angelicsage, Watzinaname, Rich, MzBlkAngel and Toylin.. thanks for the love anyways....I appreciate

    greets
    moham
     
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