Black Poetry : Dancing With Strangers (inspired by N2ur)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Feb 5, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Every move is new
    Every step an adventure
    Men dance best
    When dancing with strangers

    Like his conversation
    Movement flows free
    Unafraid of questions
    For close, a stranger will never be

    Men dance best
    When being admired
    Who better than a stranger
    Loving the dance
    Wanting more
    Dealing with the obvious
    Seen on the dance floor

    With hands on her waist
    He looks deeply into her eyes
    She'll never know the truth
    The dance will disguise

    BE

    (c) 2002
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    see BE.........

    dat's what i'm talking bout !
    u worked da twisted to a perfection
    and she'll never know ........wow!:eek: :heart:
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE.


    sometimes... women dance best with strangers
    as well. :) there's a profound message in the
    music of your words. thanks for sharin'...

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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  5. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Poets. GA you are correct. In fact, women are experts at this dance.

    BE
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE ~

    I was going back through the "archives" and found this.... boy was I overwhelmed :) pleasingly of course This is such a great piece...how could I have missed it? :confused:

    Glad I found it & I most certainly enjoyed the read!

    N2
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    feeling the depth
    the mystery
    the adventure

    nice art

    dssNY
     
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