Black Poetry : Dancing on Moonbeams (valentine request)

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  1. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can I make love to you
    that is
    if you really want me to
    you see
    what I'm trying to say
    what I really mean
    is
    I want you
    to dance with me
    on moonbeams
    I want to reach
    the heights of heaven
    in your arms
    feel your charms
    and your kisses too
    I want you to lose me
    in throes of passion
    and
    bouts of ecstacy
    created in me
    when you just reach out
    and touch me
    softly
    or look at me
    sensually
    surely you can see
    that you and me
    could create some outerworldly
    cosmic kind of connection
    if you could just recognise
    this need I have
    to feel you inside me
    constantly
    you see
    I have this notion
    that we could move
    in perpetual motion
    a non-stop neverending
    blending of our love
    where we could lose ourselves
    in each other totally
    hopelessly
    helplessly drowning
    in a sea of passion
    fashioned by our own desire
    and the need for us to be
    lost in each other
    eternally
    all you have to do
    is reach out
    and tell me
    you want me to
    make
    love
    to
    you

    (c) nfn 2003
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    shut 'em down shut 'em down

    it's on

    pd

    :)
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Kitana very romantic
    let get'em guys da ladies up 2 - 0
     
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    WOOOOWWWWEEEE!!!! Kitana I like how you brought this!!!!!
     
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    I loved it. I got a little something for later, Rich. Lovely poem, Kitana. Wish it was dedicated to me. :)
     
  6. elayne.

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    k.t.


    exquisite-ly done, chile!! :)

    ...have i told you lately that i love your
    words?? reading you is always a very
    pleasureable journey... no matter the
    subject!! thanks!! :)

    itsallLove,
    elayne.
     
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    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice Kitana! Deeply felt over here.
     
  8. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ladies rockin the house!

    Nicely done...

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
  9. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My thanks to everyone who replied, you're words are appreciated...it's been a while...but I couldn't resist a challenge from Kem!!!!

    pd..come on..we have to show that the ladies rule...

    Rich...thanks heaps
    ;) glad you're keepin' count

    Bishop..coming from one who writes love poetry all the time...I'll take those words as a big compliment:)

    Blue...thank you...looking forward to seeing what you write, now and later on..

    Kem...you know the ladies have to win...

    Layne..you have but you can always tell me again:D ...are you gonna make us all wait for your masterpiece?....

    Sista Steele....thanks for feelin it...I'm a novice at love poetry, but I intend to give it my best...lol

    Cindy..you're sweet...let's all kick butt together:heart:

    Mslucious..thank you..I see you started the ball rolling..I'm gonna have to check out all the ladies words of love....

    K
     
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