Black Poetry : DANCING IN MY HEAD

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Voice of ink dancin sweet
    doing the cha cha slide
    every word your heart speaks
    through ya eyes the love leaks
    telling me how deep and unique
    da flava of ya blue/black ink
    caressin da canvass
    capturing my soul
    wit such a strong hold bold

    I love it when we dance
    feeling yo as u feel mines
    it's like blissful romance
    touching wit mental minds
    under some hypnotic trance
    words dancin so kind
    in my head like morning sunshine
    my passion now write to you
    so u know my love is true

    Dancin in my head
    how we can mend and wedd
    share the comfort of one bed
    in compassion i never had
    together we can be perfection
    guide each other dreams & direction
    sho our humble and loyal affection
    wit the heart of deep devotion
    and set off an dancin explostion

    ya just dancing in my head
    now i want to break new bread
    to say how i need you is true
    and how my love want u too
    not one night or a while
    but in a foreverness spool of smiles
    and take this journey of many miles
    see how u dance in my head !
     
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    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Well done piece Brother ! Obviously she dancing on the pen now...don't know who she is, but she got to love it !!!
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I gotta dance in ya head...
    drip ink all in ya bed

    Surely we were meant to be
    combinding inks with me

    Will you love, honor and cherrish my mind?
    always forever be sweet and kind?

    Then I accept your proposal with all my heart
    in hopes that our ink and us ...will never part

    tight piece poet...I love this piece...^5
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i loved the flow :welldone:
     
  5. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    umm umm umm look at brother RICH! Doing it again...you always leave my heart open and my thoughts thirsting for mo':kiss:
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hey brother Keita big thanks on this one that shook my noose ....

    queent...................
    Every page stain in ink
    from da heart we spill
    combinding a two step
    dance on da radiant sweep
    allowing da space to honor
    the soul to cherish and da
    mind to savor in depth as
    our ink mend to thy creation
    yes !

    Thankz u sista queent

    Big thankz howard for the love and gracing me

    Thank u choclatangel , I must say u too have me in awe as u flow
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    Bro Rich....you just smooth with the woo you put on the ladies....such a gift......
    You spark more verbals each time I read you....


    "I love it when we dance
    feeling yo as u feel mines
    it's like blissful romance
    touching wit mental minds
    under some hypnotic trance..."

    That's like the verbal equivalent of the tango....LOL this speaks with clarity, which is so hard for me to do....

    a great write
     
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    Big thankz abstract219, and surely u have it deep inside u
    i know because i read u and see it .
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like a verbal prance down lover's lane. Yet another romantic scribe.
     
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    Thank u sista Watz for the love and visit as alwayz sis
    haven't been reading u lately what's up !
     
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