Quiet Poetry Lounge : Dancing Flames of ole.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Mar 13, 2005.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Our Love like
    dancing flames
    of his & hers
    candles just waving
    like a fire place
    as i watch the tips
    they kiss takes me back
    to our humbleness bliss
    crossin desires wit fire
    casting love in liquid
    i'll never forget our
    dinner date
    two hearts afraid yet
    feeling new so shy we
    both was scared to chew
    how funny as time go by
    and the flame that flickered
    went out , lady why ?
    question never answered
    i've place'd this life behind me
    and looked into tomorrow
    for i no longer hold such sorrow
    we became liar / liar
    beast to fox in the woods
    battling love did you not know
    i won my fight long ago
    what sad me is how u still
    live inside yesterday this why
    you can't reach tomorrow
    now i say no mo ...dancin flames
    :whip:
    :smokin: :flame: :flame: :flame:
     
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    Beat the flames out and dance into tomorrow then. Why fear what can't be seen? Yesterday is yesterday's news. Flow on.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so true but when the mind play tricks on ya it leave fear
    thankz sista for the love & support
     
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    Yesterday is yesterday today past into tomorrow going to the present making the future..cleanse thy soul and the healing of a life will present thy self....

    in other words leave the baggage and move on then one can grow...

    love how you posed this and yet it have different meaning for each reader
    i like the message in this....Angel
     
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    Just when you think the flames have died
    a spark will flicker to show you its still alive
    Love can never be contained. Its uncontrollable,
    unpredictable, and unforgetable.
    just remember it was all yesterday, it can still reminisce of smiles in tomorrow.

    Lovely drop!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz Angel i guess u have a point love the reply

    Thankz purplemoons u hit some major points and time folks
    understand love the reply
     
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    Two hearts afraid yet
    feeling new so shy we
    both was scared to chew



    Those lines knock me out

    Pure undulated FUNK!!! :dj:
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    We are the totality of our awareness-

    1poetsought ~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yeah ! 1poet i guess to shy to let the next watch as one eat
    man u know how it be in dem days of ole , Thankz brutha for the visit
    and lovin support .
     
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    let them flames dance on rich
    i'm like lpoetsought
    i also loved those lines........\"......to scared to chew
    nice..my brother...nice
     
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    thankz sista for the visit and love shown i'm so graceful
     
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