Black Poetry : Dancing Emotions

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    When feelings venture and then revolve
    hearts emotions get involve

    Around the notion of something unique
    leaving it dancing to a beat

    On soft waves and love's melodies
    have me intoxicated in fomalities

    My emotions dance in da passion
    sweetly in a drifting fashion

    Where my heart now become yours
    dwelling together in an encore

    I couldn't have felt this way without you
    for the music of love is true

    As it embrace me mentally
    you become my prime choice spiritually
    as we dance tonight away physically
     
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    Very nice. Each line induce a smile. As the beat of ur poem. Flowed smooth and true.
     
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    Most humble , thank u kindly
     
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