Black Poetry : Dancer

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Apr 21, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    From the distance I see movement
    Pure, inspired
    Free
    It is the movement of an artist
    I must come closer
    I must see

    I must see the story she is telling
    As she moves to the music
    Heard only in her soul
    She is life itself
    Unbiased expression her only goal

    She moves in uncharted rhythms
    Graceful and strong
    Changing her story with the slightest move
    I'm hypnotized by her artistry
    Lost in my own visual groove

    Dance dancer dance
    My racing heart your stage
    Let your body tell the tales
    Of what time cannot erase
    Dance dancer dance
    I'll protect your space

    My beautiful dancer
    No one else can see
    You've given your love
    And your dance to me
    Part of my life forever
    Dance on
    Beautiful dancer

    BE
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dance sister dance! this is beautiful.

    one love,blak
     
  3. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now this is what I like!!

    You've described me to the ~T~ with:

    "As she moves to the music
    Heard only in her soul
    She is life itself
    Unbiased expression her only goal"

    You've got me dancing in my seat!!!:)

    Absolutely LOVED this piece!;)
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE....

    beautiful visuals...

    had me dancin' in my seat as well!

    AlwaysPeace...
    Sunshyne~
     
  5. honeyluv

    honeyluv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the man of love see me as i am
    heartbeat u r beautiful
    i need more and more
    u just take me places
     
  6. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE,

    Excellent, Excellent, Excellent!!!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    saleem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I submit

    there is no way to hide the source of the dance...or separate the power of the rhythm's inspiration...from the eyes of all who behold her.

    this is outstanding stuff, BE.

    s
     
  8. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this piece danced on my soul. Well done



    One
     
  9. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Poets.
    Peace,
    BE
     
  10. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful BE...

    I can see her dancing to this piece ;)

    *toe-shoes*
     
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