Black Poetry : DANCE WITH ME

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MRS. LADY, Jan 6, 2008.

  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    Dance.. ballerina..

    Twirl yourself to forgetfullness
    Make love to your shadow

    In the spotlight....

    Move to the music of the masters...
    They are your world

    He is not.........

    We met once .. danced as partners..
    Up close..

    It made me hott....

    Passion as I looked at him
    One beat using two hearts....

    He lifted me... and held me there
    Suspended up in air.....

    I love to dance
    Why can't we dance

    This last dance .. Is what we share....

    So shssss... my love .. don't say a word...
    Our dance..

    We are perfect when we twirl

    Play that song... and reach for me..

    Your ballerina girl......
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Miss Lady, this was a wonderful concept, and the way you structured it, made me visualize this dance. Beautiful piece.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    This had me reaching for a hand in a Ballerina Dance
    and i could hear the song (shall we dance) in my head
    this was some awesome artistic work of art .
     
  4. Bluewater

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    very beautiful poem

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very cute poem
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    just make sure

    the music is good

    lol
     
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