Black Poetry : Dance Partners.....Forever

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Mar 16, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he IS "tenderlovingcare"
    that's what she remembers
    every detail was considered
    for her maximum comfort
    and when he touched her hand
    it was the first climax
    ...for there would be
    many more

    he personifies beauty
    that's what she recalls
    when she sees him, tall
    and regal, in her memory
    and when they embraced ~it
    was the exact moment
    they knew it would be always

    he exemplifies loyalty
    and has shown it every day in
    deed and word, and in all
    honesty ~ but she knew his
    heart and soul when they
    danced naked by candlelight
    the first time...

    Alyce, 2001
     
  2. saleem

    saleem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aleeeece!!!

    gurl, you KNOW you bring out the voyeur in me! Oh, the vision of them dancing naked by candlelight ~ too special for anymore words.(I'd just start babbling)

    peace

    S
     
  3. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful Ms A...simply and completly beautiful.

    BE
     
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    I can still smel the swwet scent of the candles still
    floe ALYCE floe.....
     
  5. Juicylv4u2

    Juicylv4u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Go Alyce :)

    erotic yet still graceful..
    I felt the flow of the passion and can smell the scent :)..whew!!
     
  6. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    you do it like no other

    Beautiful

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms A....

    you are ALWAYS so
    eloquent in expressing
    your thoughts...
    (but i ain't gonna
    bow this tyme) :)

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    belahni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms. A

    what your poetry does for me is take me 'there'. Yes, I'm with Saleem about loving the scenes you create ~ but what is particularly titillating for me, is the sense that you are RE-creating these scenes. There is a texture to your work that makes it too real, and I'm a believer ;) ~


    Thank you for sharing your love with us,

    B
     
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    The exact moment they knew
    It would be always
    Im loving this poet
    Where you at???
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a lovely thought beautifully expressed.
     
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