Black Poetry : dance for you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Sep 13, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dance for you
    Under the moon light…
    on the beach..
    pure white sand
    is where we stand…
    Watch my hips as they
    Move from side to side…
    Sl-ow-ly
    I want to dance for you….

    Watch as I tell a story of
    A once true love….

    Got me open
    As the story goes…
    slide
    Up and down
    Back and forth…..
    Just like a ride…
    Watch the hills
    Dis here is
    Where i
    may lose ya…

    eyez
    rollin
    to the back
    of yo head…
    you just hit
    paradise
    watch me
    as I dance for you…
    dippin deep
    holdin my hips…
    around and around like a
    merry-go-round
    here we go…
    swingin to my hearts beat..….

    at my own
    P-A-C-E.....

    I want to dance for you…
    Sl-ow-ly
    Hands above my head
    As I do a spin…
    Do you like the way I dance…
    a roller
    coaster
    ride
    let me take
    you higher…
    watch as I dance for you…
    dis the end of chapter 1….

    a blkangel thang...

    :kiss:

    THIS NEEDS WORK
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    do ya dance ......dis was very nice
    i truely love how if flowed to da page
    and felt da love from it .....ya ink is running smooth !
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU BUT NOT SMOOTH AS IT SHOULD BE...
    BUT THANKS FOR THE LOVE....MEANS ALOT
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is wonderful
    nice dance in vibes
    Peace
     
  5. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...this is wonderful and so visual. much respect for this.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The dance is the thing, baby girl
    You rocked my world!
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater and true love thank you for the read....

    1poetsought..u soooooo crazy..lol..welcome to my world...:D
     
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