Quiet Poetry Lounge : Dance For Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SensualReality, Apr 22, 2004.

  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pretty flame dance for me
    Pretty flame give me ya heat
    Pretty flame sway to the beat
    Pretty flame you are a treat

    Her body moved like a snake
    Swaying from side to side catching the vibe hot as a plate
    He watched her move fantasizing of a night not yet to be forgotten in extreme exstacy
    He felt the burn in his belly from pure urgency
    Her hair flowed like blue water from an ocean
    He thought of how they’d be in matrimony and forever devotion
    Eyes connect through the dim light her hips swayed left and then right
    Her body fell to the ground and slid to his feet
    The fragrance of her womanly scent was ooooh so sweet
    He longed to touch her,but those weren’t the rules
    She took a seat in his lap….as he drooled
    Leaned back into his frame
    “Desire”
    Is that her name?
    Totally wrapped up in her he didn’t want to let go
    Wanted to let the night go on and on forever like a swinging do’
    The music faded and the lights were no longer existent
    The words he mumbled under his breath were slurry and explicit
    It felt as if they connected with a invisible string
    Indescribable…is what you call this thing
    Seemed for hours he held her in his arms soaking in her sweat
    When he finally felt the need to open his eyes…
    She turned to face him and said,”I ain’t done yet.”


    Pretty flame dance for me
    Pretty flame give me ya heat
    Pretty flame sway to the beat
    Pretty flame you are a treat
     
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    I can vision a flame
    swaying from side to side!
    A beautiful dance indeed.
    Just like the words
    you used to master
    this piece! A sultry
    poetic seed.
    Loved it!
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you :rolling: sistah
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    watching the swaying
    of da blue/yellowish flame
    dance in motion
    my vision take me on
    a ride wit dis one
    love how she break her hips
    doing da cha' cha'
    nice drop my sistah
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Rich.....don't start that stuff on my thread :wink: you know what I'm talking about :lol:
     
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    lol...........i'm being good but i did strike my lighter and watch it dance
    the flames do a break down ya know this was tyte so i'm gonna be good
     
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    Thank you sir :wink:
     
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    That goes for you too moon pie wit that hot milk lol
     
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