Quiet Poetry Lounge : Dance Floor

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by phenomenalwoman, Aug 2, 2006.

  1. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It was a pleasure meeting you
    A welcomed distraction
    From the harsh reality
    That is the world today
    The disdain of what I am
    Versus what I want to be
    ...the bewilderment
    ...the habitual backslide
    ...the settling for less
    Whatever it is
    Whatever it was
    Whatever it will be
    Will have to be
    Hell
    Rome wasn't built in a day
    Dance with me
     
  2. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love this piece i love to dance so i can relate just let it all go and dance

    felt this one much much love sweettee29
     
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    I likes...

    Simple...priceless...inviting...Flow on poet:spinstar:

    :picture:

    :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet to the point and let me dance wit cha
    save the last dance for me !
     
  5. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks sweettee29, I am on a no regrets vibe right now, sure I make mistakes but I don't view them as regrets, but life experiences. You have to accentuate the positive and eliminate the negative and just dance.

    Thanks spicybrown for venturing out on the dance floor with me. Glad you enjoyed it.

    Come on now Rich you know you get the first and the last dance of the night!!!! I wouldn't have it any other way.
     
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    making me smile flow on sista flow on vibe
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel that, no regrets sistah i am on the same exact vibe straight up girl

    much much love sweettee29
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice sweet write.
    Flo on sista phenomenal.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece made me smile, brought me back to the time when a dance made me feel so footloose and fancyfree, leaving all my worries at the wayside at least temporarily. Enjoyed this vibe.
     
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    on the dance floor you can forget about everything and anything enjoyed the write my sista.
     
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