Black Poetry : Dana... ?

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  1. Absolut

    Absolut Active Member MEMBER

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    Dana...?
    By Absolut

    Soft & slight to touch….
    Sleek…so sweet the kiss..
    so much i miss the twist of hips..to taste your lips..
    to dip my soul in this..submerge myself inside your bliss…i wish..
    to click my heels & appear in your life..
    to be the man to make you my wife…my guiding light..
    the star to shine in my night..i need..
    the way u love i like..and want to be one..
    and want you to have my son...i do..
    anything for you I’ll be..
    whatever you need of me…I am..
    your man…and you are...
    my star, my earth & the air that I breathe..
    I’ll die if you’re separate from me, so I’ll never exhale..
    These words…my last I give to you to comfort you when you lack my touch…
    your eyes, your smile…the reasons why I love you so much..
    and it’s…

    ..beautiful…to me..

    it’s…

    beauty…..at it’s highest peak..
    lovely from your head to your feet…
    if only to hold me when you're lonely..these words..
    so deep I’ll speak slowly...the name of love
    ...
    poured down on me from above…it’s easy to see..
    your love when wrapped around me…
    it’s simple to hear..what I feel when we speak without words...
    when you’re touchin the nerves to my soul..when the better half of me becomes whole..
    so precious our love like kingdoms of gold…fabled like legends are told…
    tales..from the inner most part of my soul..
    beauty..speaks to me when I’m alone..
    nights..I spend sleepless on the phone...awaitin your tone..
    or just waitin for you to come home…


    What more can I say…I love the smiles you put on to my face..
    I love when you call me at work durin the day..
    I love when I leave and you beg me to stay...
    I love…the way you love me in a special way…
    I love you…..D. A. N. A.
    gurl what more can I say…

    …huh…can u hear me ?…

    the picture I paint is easy to trace when I think of your face..
    when I close my eyes or just staring in space…
    when I write these lines or just speakin my peace..
    dreamin of places we meet…stars, clouds, or just streets…
    malls..backhalls..
    just to sneak a peak at your sweet…caramel honey coated physique.
    It’s okay to weep..
    cause your love knocks me off of my feet..and…
    sometimes u wonder..
    ….hmph.(snicker)
    And I don’t wanna bore you with this…
    but girl I love you…
    I love you……I love you…

    and I don’t wanna bore you with this
    but girl I love you…

    ….

    I LOVE YOU…



    I love u…

    ….
    can u feel me ?



    Words in italics are spoken in background voice kinda like (Thoughts)...but are audible/heard like 2 people are sayin the same thing.

    Vodka

    ~1~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling ya deep down to da bone
    dis flow sho nuff on !
    tyte scribe
     
  3. Absolut

    Absolut Active Member MEMBER

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    thanks...I think this is one of those joints that comes off WAY better when actually Heard..
     
  4. liquyd

    liquyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, it's sooo tight, I'd love to hear it...
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree. I would love to hear this one up close and personal.

    Lucky, Lucky Dana!
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can feel you boo! I can feel you!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dmn, this was good!!! :toast:
     
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