Quiet Poetry Lounge : damage

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Sep 21, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tears comin down my eyes…
    I know you were not true
    Just from the time you
    Didn’t share…
    But you where what I wanted
    So I took a chance and step in your world…
    Leaving the comfort of mind…
    The damage you have done…
    You will never know…
    But remember you have
    A daughter too…
    And this will come across her as you just
    Did me…
    Now for you…you hurt me…
    But in time I will heal…
    And when I do
    I will sing one more song…
    In thank you for makin
    Me stronger….wiser
    Just to know the whole little
    Game you played with me…
    Marry me yea right
    Love me ok if you say…
    Want me
    You never did….
    My eyes have opened up
    To see you just as you are…
    A devil in a mans clothin….
    pieces of untitle life
    a blackangel thang.....
    copyright 2003
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Really really like this, girl.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    expressing da pain and joy of becoming stronger
    love this flow
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you guys ...
    glad you enjoy the read
     
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    I feel you sister. Iv'e been there before And indeed you will be stronger. Tyte scribe!
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks purplemoons
     
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    oh my sistah
    i do indeed feel this
    i am touch by the emotion
    you have compose
    much love
    Peace
     
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    lovin' this...
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater...thanks for the read

    LovelyGoldenOne..hey new mommie ta be thanks for the read...i am so happy for you...god bless...
     
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