Black Poetry : Dam

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by icandi, Oct 16, 2003.

  1. icandi

    icandi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see him my sexy black man standing there
    lighting the candles and dimming the light
    throwing roses on the bed
    trying to get the mood right
    he even whips out peaches and cream
    and pops in TP 2
    he even stretches a little cause he knows its gonna be a...
    LONG NIGHT
    he looks in the mirror to make sure hes looking his best
    he re-brushes his teeth to make sure his breath is smellin fresh
    and then all of a sudden
    a beautiful black woman walks in the room
    she is ready to be wined and dined
    you can tell shes in a good mood
    two bodies in moiton
    the chemestry is all there
    he starts to please her
    in the bed he has prepared
    now hear i am with my hopes all up
    seeing the man i love take so much time to make the mood right
    the woman so beautiful whos ready to be wined and dined
    i hope you figured out she just wasent me
    and to think i was gonna give him some tonight....dam
     
  2. LadySag

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    ****!! tyte piece keep it flowin'
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    all now i love dis here keep flowin
    tyte piece of art
     
  5. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my god :cry: how could he do that! i loved the flow though. much love
     
  6. angelicsage

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    whaaat...

    this was a smooth flow but had a wickedly sad twist...
    peace
     
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    ish happens
    when a cat is rap'n
    only dogs like tap'n
    different berries like capt'n
    crunch
    man he was not
    just my hunch....

    nice scribe...
    keep flow'n
    peace
    khasm