Black Poetry : DAG

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Sep 23, 2003.

  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    i used to hear you
    grind you teeth in the night
    wondered if it was just stress
    or maybe
    u were still on that stuff

    it would wake me outta my sleep
    like rubbin tWO metal sheets
    and i'd look at you and think
    i won't hurt his feelings
    this secret i'll keep.

    in your waking hours
    u look at me shady
    out the corners of your eye
    paranoid , lightweight crazy
    for no reason.

    u stayin up all night
    cleaning and watching tv
    i come down to use the bathroom
    us stand outside and wait
    for me..

    yellin' and twitchin
    outta pure aggravation
    ur mind was racing with
    your past convictions

    that caught up with you
    all the bodies you slain
    all the souls you devoured
    u now hear the screams
    and

    feel their pain.

    to stupid to cry
    and forgive ur weaknesses
    to stubborn to apologize
    but still want Gods blessin's

    u had the money, fast cars
    and hoes, still pleasantly unhappy
    miserably contented and no
    peace ever flows
    to your soul

    even ur mind can't be quiet
    when the room is dead silent
    cause you sow, now you reap
    only so many secrets one
    can keep

    and i loved u as a friend
    shed blood, tears and even
    took all your shat and made
    rose petals out
    of it

    i'd feed u if all your limbs
    fell numb but your to dumb
    and selfish to know
    this.

    i'd protect your rep and wipe
    your az with my last dollar
    but you'd rather be broken hearted and brutal
    and pop your collar.

    what a fool.

    and tell your friends
    my business and run
    and put out my fire
    with salted water and thus
    ur mercury conflicted us.



    i did love you

    and all u could do
    at best
    was
    hate me.
     
  2. SwtT

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    wow....this was soo tyte MORE...:hot:
     
  3. MORE

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    :kiss: :kiss:
     
  4. gempis

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    This part is sooo dope:

    still pleasantly unhappy
    miserably contented and no
    peace ever flows
    to your soul


    scribe on, MORE!
     
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    Now that the frown is gone. Let your soul float into a quiet storm. Of someone that heals the blow of what you must forget.

    Thanks for sharing. This is a tight flow MORE.. much love
     
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    WHOOOOOOO....I like and can very well relate to the subject. Nice skrybe.
     
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    I hung on to your every thought. A very good read!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sistah u have expressed a heart feeling scribe
    u go gurl !!! lay it all out there
     
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    this was tight...
    love dis on every word
     
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    "to stupid to cry
    and forgive ur weaknesses
    to stubborn to apologize
    but still want Gods blessin's "

    TIGHT