Black Poetry : dag

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Aug 20, 2003.

  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    something in my chest
    is making me pissed
    i don't know exactly what
    it is

    i came in today
    feeling just fine
    i used to wake up
    with tears in my eyes

    but now something shifting
    like templates on the sea floor
    currents slowing moving
    making me sure than
    not sure...

    and i want to be one way
    and stay that way all day
    u know
    happy

    but even a sorrowful heart
    can smile on the outside
    thats something that sucks
    too much too much

    whatever it is
    i just want to kick
    somebody's az hit them
    lick, by lick

    my chest caving in
    trying to regain composure again
    guess its hard when
    u don't know what it is....
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so very well-written and...

    I know this feeling soooooooooooo well. I survived this time and you can too. Keep the faith and the hope alive, MORE, cause it's gonna be OK. We luvs ya here at destee.

    :heart: :heart: :heart:MORE:heart: :heart: :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I felt you 100%
    i too have this feeling as of late
    come happy leave pissed
    what's up wit dis
    is it my seal of kiss
    or just some crazy hit bliss
    don't know til i find out what it is

    o' my i know !
    dis a well felt flow
    i gotta go........
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i hate that feeling :( its a dangerous thing fa sho...feel better MORE :)
     
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    feelin u gurl, this is deep keep on scribin