Black Poetry : Daddy's Love

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  1. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    never felt daddy's love
    never knew what love
    could feel like from
    my daddy
    never heard those three
    letter words
    you know the ones
    i am talking about...
    i
    love
    you.
    yeah, those words

    never felt that he cared
    never heard that he did
    or that he does
    never heard those two
    letter words...
    i
    care.
    yeah, those words

    never felt daddy's love...
    daddy never needed us,
    his two little girls
    i go from day to day
    not really thinking
    about my daddy's love....
    daddy's love never felt

    yet, still i just wonder,
    how can daddy go from
    day to day, not really
    knowing his two little
    girls?
    how can daddy not
    know that his two little
    girls are beautiful grown
    women now, that still
    needs their daddy's love?

    never felt daddy's love....

    never heard daddy
    apologize for not
    being there for his
    two little girls
    never heard those
    three letter words...
    i
    am
    sorry.
    yeah, those words

    just never felt daddy's
    love....





    ~~~foritisiwhoistrulytroubledtoday~~~

    -kas lis 01.09.02, all rights reserved
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Fatherly love be not

    sadly sad notions of not knowing
    his love the wordz i care yet ya
    made it this far but daddy's love
    still needed........i feel u as i see
    so many without thelove of daddy

    what u feel is real.....and leaves wonderment!
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    these words

    are both beautiful and sad...
    and yes, I wonder if he ever stops to think of the hurt his non-love causes...
    for how can a parent not love their child....or want to know the adult that child became..


    K
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for your soul Poet.

    BE
     
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    Lister, my sister

    this brings the tears....

    thank you for sharing

    a
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like Kitana said, this is both beautiful and sad. Little girls need their daddies just as much as the sons. This is why many girls get hurt by young men...giving sex for love that daddy wouldn't give. So many hurting people, daddies and their little girls.
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lister.


    ...this is a very touching piece dear friend.
    it was difficult for me to imagine.... since i
    am a daddy's gyrl from top ta bottom. :)....
    but.... I am so thankful that you shared
    this with me (us).

    ALwaysLove&Peace.
    SunShyne~
     
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    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lister

    ..heartfelt piece poet...I know something of these type feelings..
    scribe them out...peace

    g-man
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Listerscribin, this was a heartwrenching piece, so sad, but true. BTW, I wonder where some of these awol poets are now?
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was madd deep.......to be honest I never felt my daddy's love either..... :cry: .....so I know just how you feel sistah.....but don't let that get you down......even though he never said it he probably thinks of you every waking second.......much luv sistah.....and blessings in your heart.
     
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