Black Poetry : daddy

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  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ever since he stopped actin real
    i been actin crazy
    tryin to hide my feelings
    like he dont faze me

    even my friends kno
    they tell me i got issues
    cuz of him

    about how he wasnt there
    and i tell em- yeah
    and continue to act like i dont care

    tryin to hide all da pain im fellin inside
    rememberin when i was his lil girl
    his baby
    his pearl

    but things aint never gonna be da same
    aint gonna
    ever since i heard da new one might get my last name

    but i admitt- he got me all screwed up
    cuz i over valued what he meant to me
    got me thinkin that i need his love to grow
    since he was my water and i am his seed
    he created me

    but i guess everything just aint meant to be
    even tho he's there for them and not for me
    and ima still try to achieve sucessfully
    and do my best

    im tryin to move on
    but my mind wont let me
    i cant stop wondering what he did to my psyche
    or one thing he did that was right

    my brain is killing me
    while i search my diary
    for da ansa
    wat could it be

    the closest i come is me.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well felt here sometime we can get into a motion
    and fall deeply
     
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    ScorpioStylez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hold ya daddy u only have one no matter what happens. Love the poem
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You try not to feel the hurt because the pain is just too much. This is so well written and felt. Keep flowing, poet.
     
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