Black Poetry : Daddy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by DestinyLove222, Nov 16, 2003.

  1. DestinyLove222

    DestinyLove222 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Daddy
    I know I never show you love
    but my heart tells of the love I have for you
    even though sometimes it doesn't show
    You haven't been there for me sometimes
    but I forgive you
    Cause it is the right thing to do
    17 years of my life have been spent of
    me seeing you once in a blue moon
    You say you will call but you don't
    or maybe it because you just don't want to
    But I will always need you in my life regardless
    of the way you act towards me
    I love you Daddy no matter what
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    forgiveness from the heart
    this is beautiful
    nice flow
    this is a wonderful scribe
    much love and many blessing
    Peace
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    indeed wonderful...
    much love on dis...:angel1:
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    forgiveness is a beautiful thing:)
    I liked your flow:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    forgiveness and pure love is what keep it
    all together ....well felt
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow gurl I wish i could say that to my biological father at 16...but it took me a lil longer lol but I am happy that i finally came to see what u did and I am happy that u have relieved yourself of that burden as well :)
     
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    Keep that love strong and remember that he's just human and we all make mistakes.

    Eventually, he will understand that whether he likes it or not, you are a part of him.

    Peace.
     
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