Black Poetry : daddy where are you

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  1. Dupe

    Dupe Active Member MEMBER

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    i'm lost in the world with out you
    the last time i saw you i was only two
    i've been hurt and no one to run to
    daddy where are you
    i need to know why
    you aren't by my side
    i sit constantly say to myself
    is it something i did to make him leave my by myself
    tears i've cried for 17 years
    when i needed you to comfort me from all my fears
    you weren't there
    daddy where are you
    You had another man come and take your place
    he wasn't nothing but a disgrace
    did things that a normal daddy wouldn't do
    **** daddy where are you
    i don't have visual of you
    but just the thought of never meeting someone who birth you
    think about it
    do u miss me, are you aware of who i am
    do you even give a ****
    why couldn't you step up to the plate and be a real man
    on fathers day
    what do i do
    but sit a say a prayer for u
    it's not like i can hate someone i've never known
    my poor mother doing it all on her own
    4 kids all by herself
    one less cause i take care of myself
    yeah she birth me but so did you
    man daddy where are u
    so much anger built inside
    having no one to confide...in
    a bastard i am without a father
    man,where are you daddy
     
  2. cypher

    cypher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can relate don't know mine either but i have destroyed that cycle and am raisin my two baby boys like a real man should.....the love we have lost is not something that we should be bitter about, because we have a true father who is always there....keep praying and love strong...
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Real and close to home, I'm feelin' it-

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  4. PurpleMoons

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    feelin your pain young man. stay strong and be wiser than your daddy. loved your scribe
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    men of men u r by far
    daddy gone out to roam
    u & moma home alone
    i feel ya here be what he wasn't to ur children
    be of GODLY love & bond
    da pain u leave with always be
    but ya heart will allow u to see keep moving upward
     
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