Black Poetry : Daddy-O

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Earthly Allure, Apr 12, 2004.

  1. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Under the glow of
    an orange moon, and
    a little silver rain;
    I sit in thought
    smoking on a soul flower,
    feeling good and smooth.
    Surrounded by the sounds of
    Erykah Badu in the Key of mellow,
    I'm in my flow, a real cool fellow.
    My mind wraps itself around
    many, many ideas
    and I just float free.
    Brooding on nothing, some sort
    of a new-age
    Othello.

    "...Soul flower, take me flying
    with you...puff..."

    Thinking of nothing particularly,
    just feeling breezy, easy and laidback,
    My body in tune and grooving
    I'm in a heightened state of bliss
    while puffin on green grass vapors and
    a memory of a kiss.
    I'm feeling good tonight.
    As the rain falls quietly outside my window,
    I fall deeper into my peaceful
    world of shadows.

    Puffin' on my soul flower,

    and floating nice and free.

    ...Man...

    ...Be easy, Peace.

    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/ "Earth's Wynne Publishing"
    ~Daddy-O
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    QQ....this was sweet
    i went on a trip dang
    nice drop

    [email protected]
    flow on
    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad you could come along for the ride love. Thank you for your love.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and ya welcome
    keep on flowing
     
  5. PurpleMoons

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    Dang! I just love that unique
    signature in your scribes!
    Got me,aaaaaaaah!
    poppin my finger tips
    and riding the frequencies Daddy-o!
     
  6. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOLOLOLOL Thanks purple. I'm diggin ya vibe as well ma.
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My eyes watering you keep bringing it like this I loooove it!lol
    :uzi:
     
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    This was soooooooo smooth...

    I hung on to each stanza...

    Love the feeling this piece

    left me with...

    ...A cool vibe...of poetry

    At its best... :new:
     
  9. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sensual and Angelic I appreciate all of both of ya'll's love *smile* You both make me feel so good.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your words take us deep into a mellow groove. Keep them coming.
     
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