Khasm13 : Daaaaaam...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    it's the return of the black man
    still smokin like a chimney...
    the boyz are still try'n to pin me
    while toxic smoke stays toked in the city that stays windy
    the more i fit in...the more alien i feel
    like mork traveling the universe without mindy and a force field shield
    let's build...
    roy ayers trys to send me
    cause every time i turn on my cable
    the devil trys to get in me
    with previously prescribed potent modulations
    flowing on all frequencies encompassing all the stations
    erasing my motivations and stalking me like jason
    while stealing my lifeforce leaving me shriveled like a raisin
    <pause>
    righteousness i'm still chasing
    when racing on the basin because it's reality i'm facing
    while lackeys lurk and leer at these lines and start pacing
    tasting each succulent stanza derived from energies that are ancient
    served on an anti-matter platter from a hand that remains patient
    in the fluid flurry of time...time blurs lines...and lines blur minds
    because fear is the mind-killer and they can't have mine
    mine is reserved for the cosmos and the most divine
    <pause>
    a friend of mine once told me that
    dogs on hinds are guilty of multiple crimes
    and until the light shines...the shadows collect the fines
    which is fine by me...
    cause i'll still be on my perch looking down on the church
    smokin like a chimney...
    with cheeky-eyed dissatisfaction and eyes the color of a blood-stained penny...
     
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    peace God..........

    daaaaaaaaaaam, where do I start - this whole piece is fiyah......

    my favorite line which was hard to pick was:

    - smoothe and rugged at the same time.....

    in a word, priceless
     
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    Dayaaaaaaaaammmmmm

    is Right!
    Daaaam pause...this piece is Tight
    Daaaam pause...see WE ain't gave up no Fight
    Daaaam pause...our Spirits still shining

    BRIGHT!!!


    :bowdown::bowdown::bowdown:

    M.E.
    :hearts2:
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um this piece has real hip hop

    and some great lines here for example

    some real hot street ish here on the low low

    peace
     
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    Dat was awesome and you know dayummmmm is right
     
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    You have this talent for creating a poem full of quotables. The reader sees one line that makes them go whew, and then that's not the end, cause here comes another and another. Tight write.
     
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    Khasm13

    This flow is :spinstar::spinstar::spinstar::spinstar::spinstar:five star.

    Deep down you know you have transcended,
    gone way beyond what use to be.
    Way beyond the casual stand around
    smoking choking, on the underground.

    Like an alcoholic who can’t kick it,
    or a junky for another high.

    Stay strong not give to the casual in the sky.

    This flow is right on point and very powerful K.
    Man this is another of your phenomenal flows.
     
  8. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maybe I should Have stayed away from this one huh?

    Whoa my brother...THis wasnt a flow
    it wasnt a Rhyme
    I don't want to say it was fiya
    BUT..........GOT THE POWWER TO TAKE YA HIYA!
    listenin to dream
    of getting cream
    the minds so obscene
    Eyes getting lazy
    Because the game tryna play me
    It's crazy

    I aint got it like you big bro...so.....Ima leave that alone!
    LOl
    FLOW ON Like The Re-runned song!!!!
    :lol:
     
  9. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dayumn

    somethin' made me stop what i was doin' and focus on this poem. it had such depth yet, clarity. i lived in nap-town and never ventured up to chi- however, this, i'm sure, is a glimpse into the reality of chi-towns aura. you penned this well, poet. you've got that langston touch, with a little saul williams and hmm... a bit of dead prez!!! fire indeedy... props
     
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    flo on poet.