Black Poetry : Da VIEW of SHE.

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Laying exposed in my nakedness
    under the glist of soft moonlight
    awaiting the misty brush of her
    a tear falls as the vision of lust
    cometh upon me for her arrival

    Her kiss was warm and wet
    hands crossin my nudity wit comfort
    in my slumbering eyes i see her
    leaving me breathless for more
    and a deep hunger of desires within

    I linger longer searching to know of
    her solace and existance to my space
    she came like a theft in da night
    taken me by submission of compassion
    now i only can embrace the memories

    That paints a profolio of beauty
    and a lasting fantasy of fire blazzin
    I know not of her yet feel her so close
    drenched inside a fierce rapture
    all i can hear is her soft moan & silent scream
    as she whisper again and again deeper !

    If now i could see her face to trace
    da maze of love she pose and gave
    secretly without ever touching me
    i could become unconditionally in love
    who are u my sweet that has me in captivity ?

    :luv: :luv: :luv: :?: :luv: :luv: :luv:
     
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    the capture of this mystery woman face
    has you wanting to taste

    the very sweetness of her fruit
    you so loving the youth

    and joy she brings
    the passion you feel makes your heart sings

    as the dream of thee is with you every night
    could she be close to you like a whisper of delight

    call her name and set her free
    who is she could it be me

    call me in the light but never in the dark
    i give you me and also my heart

    love come take me as you want
    flaunt

    what we could share
    i so want to bear

    whatever my souls would like to reveal
    you appeal

    to me
    see
    me

    for the lovely vision you so describe
    you would love unconditionally never would i bribe

    you to stay
    or play

    with you heart or play with your mind
    i give you me this sweet devine

    as I dream about you in the darkness of the nyte
    when the when blows i think its you byting

    the very parts of me
    come set me free

    as i try to get

    Da view of you!!!!!!!!!
    :ilu:
     
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    I am that i am
    from da view u vision
    and da feel of my mission
    can it be
    seeking da face of thee
    inside da submissional square
    dancin in the moonlyte
    from da darkness of sight
    where my love a glo
    ready for da sensual sho
    up up in flyte away we go
    to set u free
    give u something sweet
    be ya daily treat
    u my humble feast
    as i get da view of u .
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm the one who has caressed your mental
    For so many a nights
    I came to visit you and bring you delight
    Although I'm still gossamer
    Until you find and release me
    I revel in the contact the touch
    Of skin on skin

    You say this is just a dream
    But I think its a vision of reality
    Telling us of the things to come
    You're a true visionary
    Bringing me to life just because
    You only can think me up

    So come to me tonight on
    The whisper of the wind
    So we can share a deeper passion
    Than every other night

    Kisses and hugs turn to
    moans and groans
    legs intrerlocked around ur neck
    As you slowly put my body in check

    And just like that I'll be gone
    But I'll always leave a trace
    You just have to open your minds eye
    Cause in all honesty you've already seen my face
     
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    I think the answer is she is whoever you deem her to be. Seductive flow with that splash of intrigue, enjoyed the flows in response as well.
     
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    How can it be
    and what my eyes see
    when i know not
    Da view of thee
    will make me complete

    From the warmth of love
    to da breeze of air
    looking seekin every where
    i know the feel beyond touch
    i kissed the thoughts ova & ova
    hug the times of sharing

    Every night and by day
    forth thy face i trace
    in search of to remember
    as we lock into a passion
    so beautifully compromised
    in honesty i still lone to see
    thy image of love through one's
    face for a view of she.
     
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    I just guess ya right watz , i so deem who she be within me
    and the image she pose as love like a two step play............
     
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    $$$RICH$$$

    they need to ban you
    you are on fire man
    dang
    you trying to burn the panties off?

    lol
     
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