Black Poetry : Da Unknown Body

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Jan 11, 2005.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Soundly under da mass of chaos & sin
    a passion leaks , soul rocks
    they can't see for da love is locked
    they won't see da unfolding mystery
    but pose a heart full of zinc
    brewing divine a scent secretly
    Rewind and new remarkably
    a soul so true undetected
    wisdom , knowledge still neglected
    confession is da only connect

    Mystery manifests in a monumental
    a blur & deathness of da temple
    in a vision tongue become flutter
    casting darkness undercover
    still one stand close da silent lover

    A message spelled clear
    a worthy place of care
    yet one haven't heard
    the sololy word
    humble hope in sweet hush
    tap at me like a gold rush
    filling a void i trust as i conceive
    my breath just to speak
    to da people openly
    a link to my will become commonly

    pushed back my emotions stain
    deep in heart sliding to my brain
    eternally yet unseen my existance
    i pose no temperamental affection
    my picture can not be
    my face is of three
    like da windz and earth and heaven
    i blow wit meassure
    on me is da sweetest pleasure
    once above is forever .................


    A Dyamond creation
    Nu~wave production 2005
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heart, body and soul has called them out of love

    Beautiful, my brother.
     
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    WHOA! Love the depth is this flow, $$RICH$$. A journey for my mental, for real. I love it when you get like this. :flamet:
     
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    Brotha Rich, I saw this one on different levels, but the one I will speak on, is how some cannot truly see beauty because their vision has been temporarily blinded by life. I like the way you flowed in layers poet, flow on.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz 1poet it was one that cross my path at that moment

    thankz gempis for the love sis as i weave my way wit pen

    thankz watz this was one that came to me like a flash
     
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