Black Poetry : Da underworld taste blood

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    In the fire pit boiling souls
    mixed of fear taste so bold
    a taste of blood
    the underworld reverse da word

    captures wit eyez of blood shot red
    hypnotized the landz of darkness
    cry & weep in the night
    for destruction holds no light
    mental minds worried
    from the lies told of the bitter tongues
    and the betrayal of acts swung

    where human stood da bones clicks
    from da wickness of corruption
    as they corrupt another soul
    now the holla of hell come from da underworld
    to clash wit da tales of darkness
    to clean up and destroy the myth spoken

    the seeker seeks justice
    and the prey seeks light
    but at the bottom of the pit
    is only darkness and fright
    corps move about as foot worriors
    can u smell the funk in da air scary
    da sleeping hollow awakens
    death angel now loom da room
    of midnight wit no cares

    only vow to take every motal soul
    of corruption u no longer belong on the land
    for the underground awaits u
    the blood he taste is raw cold and stinks
    whom so judge will be judged by underworld
    one's who seek it's revenge on
    there is no tomorrow for tonight the lights go out

    ova da world call earth
    all taken by da bite goodbye
    those who stay awake live
    if not true to self ya meanings
    mean nothing but a invite to da pits
    where flames hotter and burns
    his hunger big death he yearnz
    stay dry if u will for the blood
    is tasty and the shadows watching
    to take into the soul

    going down in defeat tonight !!!
    so speaketh da underworld
    chilly cold thrills of unworthyness
    now face the death angel of hell
    get right before midnight or
    dooms day will be knocking
    u can't hide nor run from the
    creepy moans of da pit
    it's calling numbers not names

    (what's yours?)
    all eyez on the land of blood
    for the taste is bitter but ruby red
    striking souls tonight by will
    for the lies be no more
    only shakes of fear
    he's here licking the lips
    mesmerizing helplessly
    of captivity darkness covering
    faster as the time nears midnight

    nasty blood of sinners tasty
    to the tale of the crypt by own
    hand created da underworld of
    unjustice cheap and define thrill
    laugh now for tonight da smile
    turn to frowns of tears
    heed the creed of the UNDERWORLD
    for he's here upon da land
    tasting da blood of drips left behind
    what a path to follow !
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i dont know what to say
    these scribes from the underworld
    is deep and scary
    this is some very very creative
    writes.......Angel
     
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    EPIC PROPORTIONS!

    Always a good sign when I see a series of your pieces.
    Keep on keeping on...Hold down the fort...catch ya in a short!

    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE!
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    I could have sworn I posted to this one...

    Anyway, yes it will, Rich. The underworld will get you if you play in the dark.

    Tell it like it is, bruh...tell it like it is.


    Dapz....:toast:
     
  5. $$RICH$$

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    Angel ......scary and breath taking cold and deadly

    MsB....the underworld of defeat is like pure pit fall

    Monetary......indeed the darkside of darkness into
    the underworld always get it's prey

    the taste of blood from da bite of the underworld
    thankz for the visit within to u all
     
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    he lone the taste of blood
    he creeps tonight to devor
    da souls that walks in da
    shadows of doubt
     
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    He has risen and now seek thy prey of deed
    da death angel is back lurking awaiting to strike
    for days are numbered !!
     
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