Black Poetry : Da UnderWorld strikes tonight

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    death loom in da shadows
    of the hand that rocks
    for the tongue is of lies
    speaking in motal corrupted
    vows and the chill of the soul
    now become the trap of a
    sinners emotion as the shells
    of the underworld corps
    awaken in a hunger and put down
    the wrongful doers in the wind
    sweep of the thousand years funk
    the chills of the night become
    long and da pits boil as it rise
    the eyez of the death angel stand
    upon da land of no justice
    where humans souls gather
    he now grin :grin: inside da room
    as the lights dem
    candles burn out
    shadows cover all those who fight
    to stay a live ya body start to shilver
    from the evil of a thriller
    the underworld now seek revenge
    da beckoning of calls are heard
    tonight !!!
    he strikes
    wit destruction from corrupted mental
    feet flap hands of steel cold wet
    deep inner chills he comes

    time u pray ya door is pass
    ya lights helps
    and the underworld move by
    for the stain of blood is shead
    the starz cross into darkness
    the heat of the pits melts & stick
    like hot wax ya skin become numb
    the moon pack up and run
    tonight
    he come both horns razor sharp
    pix fork like a six shooter poking
    at the heart :heart: da shadow
    as u walk not yours as u look closer
    u see his face
    for the first and last time as u go under
    to the warth of the underworld power of
    unjustice
    now the underworld prey is set as written
    in the stroll

    Da stroll of the underworld of defeat....

    from deep down within
    da cast of spell is made
    death angel come upon
    da land of faces for one
    not ready to be of goodness
    yet lie, steal , cheat & coz
    conflict of corruption for now
    the souls is yours to take
    as it lay down to never wake
    into da doom of da pits
    is the betrayal
    bow down and vow
    as the thrillin , chillin tales
    come to carry da sinner
    into the web which was weaved
    but thy own hands & tongue
    DESTRUCTION .....of da underworld
    come tonight
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What-A-Thrilla!

    Man, don't scare me like that. POWERFUL-
     
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    my brutha 1poet
    da ground rumbles
    far out thunder roar
    the one watching
    da prey of da land
    for the ground opens
    the death angel reaching
    tonight is the night
    he feed on the souls
    for the LIGHT is the only way of safety
    he comes hunger
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is some deep stuff
    tight writes as well
    shows a different side
    a very deep creativtive side
    nice write.....angel
     
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    angel.....
    tonight he comes
    wit all razor sharp
    fingers seeking ready
    he will strike tonight
    for the motal souls
    is to be taken under
    da prey of his eyez is set
    no return ,,,,,,,,,da light is the only safety
    his face to look upon is scary

    the take ova from da underworld
     
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    The light is the only safety.

    U got me all shook up, bruh, This some scary ish.
     
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    for he fears the LIGHT of reality
    the safe harbor for the underworld
    but he's powerful and deadly
    indeed some scary stuff

    thankz for the dip inside the underworld as he strikes
     
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    laughiing..yeah i know
    it got me scared 2
    wow Brother Rich..:)
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    within the light ur safe & sound
    the darkside of shadows he walk
    seeking and set to strike his prey
    red eye evil looms
    stay in the LIGHT !!!!!!!

    thankz for the visit inside the strike zone
     
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    i will stay in the light so bright
    and keep my site on the positive side
    staying away from that dark side fright
    Peace
    Blue:heart:
     
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