Black Poetry : Da underworld speaks 2 da sinners

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    From da darkside
    speaks to thy tongue
    of lying forth da shadows
    of the underworld comes
    in the mist
    of the forsakers
    da evil lurk da landz
    of the earthly grounds
    seeking da 7 souls
    of betrayal human bones

    and all who struggle to
    stay alive ya body start
    to shake when it can't
    exscape the warth of da
    darkside
    it speaks in the motion
    of the deep unended place
    where no return no hope
    and destruction from da
    corrupted correction of the
    evil eye that found a home

    from the bodies of da crypt
    a smell of 40 thousands years
    maniacs loom from da tomb
    madness roam the air maze rooms
    seeking
    watching
    death shadows moves
    red moon cry
    from the cast of tales
    ya sorry lies
    the bite on u for the
    crazy thoughts of cheating
    for the myth of wordz
    it deems u to doom
    in the pits of hell
    for now the skies darken
    the starz hide in shame
    the blood run da river
    the ground rumbles
    forth i am coming
    unto da very one who
    no longer feel da direction
    of da power
    fear not of my speaking but
    my beings when it get close
    to mid night ya body scream
    in a thrill of chills of da darkside
    UNDERWORLD
    sinners beware of the warth
    for ya soul is mines
    coming
    xxxxcoming
    xxxxxxxcoming
    one's of goodness stay in the light
    for the shadows of darkness covers
    the land to feast on da corrupted ...
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man oh man
    this was so deep thrillin read...
    i am so speechless
    this was a tight drop
    loved how you placed it
    all the way down
    just deep..............Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da darkness of da land
    starts to cover and the
    scary souls shakes
    the tongue freeze up
    da mind wonders if
    only da night will tell

    thankz for crossing into da underworld of da speaker
     
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    rahstagal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    underworld, very nice, but then again darkness could be the sexiest place considering..lol anyways keep it up
    praise
     
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    indeed it can be but enter the underworld
    can be a darkside of cold & pain too
    as it seeks da souls

    thankz 4 da visit to da underworld of da speaker
    rahstagal
     
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    Oh, but if only those tongues could freeze...lol..keep doing your thang, I'll try to stay in the light.
     
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    those loose tongues
    of destruction is now
    da myth of what was
    as the underworld move
    in the shadow of darkness
    forth the fear of da soul
    become cold
    da death angel seeking , watching
    need to feed on 5 sould before da
    return to da ground
    hell is unleashed from da darkside

    thankz for listening to the dark wonder speak
     
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    my goodness
    you got me
    a little scare
    for real
    wow
    feeling this
    tale
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    Bluewater fear not
    forth ya soul is in
    da light da great protector
    he afraid of the light

    da shadows of is beings
    from da underworld seeking
    da sinners of false tongue

    Thankz for the visit to the underworld
     
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    now that i'm awaken
    from the funk of thousand
    years tears are worthless
    as i speak
    the darkside seeks from
    da eye of corruption
    the sinners now shame
    of all the wrong done
    da speaker has open the
    flood gates to the play pit
    now destructional mass
    is uncovered the time now
    awaits for the bite

    if u turn da light off once ur mines
    da underworld want u
     
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