Quiet Poetry Lounge : Da Underworld return w/Da Undertaker

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    In da morrow it shall rise
    to life slumbering suprise
    wit da funk of forthy years
    and the mask of eyelid tears
    casting the deem of fears

    Da underworld rise from da
    pits of hell to cast upon it's
    evil spell on da dwell of earth
    can't be rejected it's a curse
    of conflicked depth or worse
    stay in the light tonight !!

    Undertaker body maker comes
    out the rage of fire to take
    souls at his desire, he walks
    the land of death shadows
    stand 7 feet 3 inch tall
    shade of pal wit a nasty smell
    fingers crump as whitchies yell
    breath of mold old as day
    from the pits of death they say
    rotten as he rise from da tomb
    to terrorize and seal ya doom
    be afraid very afraid lock ya doors
    keep on ya lights he's depth
    a demon of fright a funky sight

    He rise like death angel
    to manipulate ya soul
    bring air of freezing cold
    strolls desperately delivering
    his sin to da man , woman
    and children the underworld
    u can't define or place in ya
    mind for he will come unto u
    that night he from da pits of
    hell where destruction dwell
    fire eyes wistful gaze he starez
    lofty tongue of no cares just
    to crucify eternal life with depth
    of terminal disease

    Keep ya lights bright
    beware and afraid for
    the UNDERTAKER looms
    the land for life form of
    woman or man he lives ...
    :jawdrop: :eeek: :eeek: :eeek: :eeek: :eeek: :eeek: :jawdrop
    :

    Da Underworld production
    Nu~wave~ Ink creation
    05 $R
     
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    We haven't seen the underworld in a while, how come he's coming back now? Well, I ain't skurred of no ghosts...nor ghouls...besides, I have plenty of light from my birthday candles...
     
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    be afraid very afraid watz the uNdErTaKeR is deadly
    the light is a key candles blow out watch how u sleep
    beware how u dream he lives off human screamz ......

    Death angel upon da land once again he's back and here.
     
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    This is a different type of drop from you but I must admit the delivery made me think of all the scary stories I used to hear not so long ago. i do believe yougave me a small chill with this one.
     
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    Beware and afraid he walks the land
    in the depth of shadows he smell like
    no other from the tomb of hell Da Undertaker is Here !
    stay in the light soulful2006 don't dream....................
     
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    her you go using your words to evoke some emotion but you do it well. I love it.
     
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    I love when you take it here...it speaks of the loud....and hits the point....

    awesome vibe Rich i enjoyed this one to the fullest....
     
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    he lives ladies keep da lights tonight
    be afraid and lock all doors , windows
    and don't dream or scream ..............


    ya Know Angel the series is back and this time he
    have an undertaker of destruction when will a hero arrive

    Thankz for the visits to the underworld of pits
     
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    Trick ......or.......treat !

    Underworld Undertaker looms
     
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    He's Backkkkkkkkkk !!!!!
    coming for u da UnderTaker walkz
    he's ya trick and u his treat !
     
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