Black Poetry : Da UnderWorld enter ya Dreams

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da battle of the Death angel
    like da dreamcatcher
    as darkness cover the land
    a thousand funk close at hand
    creature crawl insearch of blood
    to terrorize the inner dream hood
    those who fight to stay alive
    ya body starts to shilver
    as ya soul rock inside da corps
    shell from the underworld of the
    death angel who comes from
    the howls of hell literally
    like da demons of the night
    da inmate of dreams
    to sentence u into a panic scream
    he lurks da land for the souls of
    corrupted corruption of tongues
    speaking then run
    nowhere to hide for he's in the
    dreams now for da fantastic revenge
    to kill what u thinking
    meaner then Freddy Krueger
    stronger then Jason voorhees
    so sleepers of corruption
    creepy crawlers enter ya sleep
    da fears now to motal he keeps
    da nightmares of power come
    at midnight hours to horrify
    so be ware and terrified of the
    gruesome red eyez of da underworld
    as he enter ya world of dreams
    SCREAM BLACKULA SCREAM !!!!
    as he enter ya dreams to set a
    destructional mass so beware
    as u sleep remember to always take
    a peep to see and
    don't dream of sex
    for he enter hot and wet
    for da shadows of darkness in the room
    don't dream of fear it enter wit no cares
    to come upon his face will leave a trace
    of nevermore
    if u catch a chill wake up fast before the
    thrill of the pits open up to take u in
    he's electricfying to the sleeping soul
    ready to rock u in a lala bye of a tomb

    he's coming to ya dreams
    some may need to stay awake
    those who sleep watch how u dream
    death angel love human screams
    he's here !!!
    waiting
    watching
    from da UNDERWORLD of DARKNESS

    stay in the light don't dream don't scream
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my goodness
    this one was just off it
    no dreamin for me...
    got my lamp on and i am
    stayin in the light fo sho
    Angel
     
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    i got my teddy bear... that will make them scared....:)
    feeling you bro...release that dark side
    Peace
    Blue:heart:
     
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    rich, i could definitely relate to this piece...first of all i have an affinity for horror, but secondly i can relate to the spiritual aspect...good write brothaman
     
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    dude...
    your flows are coming after catz
    like da boogieman...
    tight joint dude...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    Very "flow"etic! Felt the vibe!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    angel.............indeed the light is a key and no dreams
    for he is near i smell the funk of the underworld very foul

    Bluewater .......yes the darkside is awaken and here upon
    the landz call earth from the underworld one thing
    he fear not teddies for he worse then da boogeyman
    and souls is da mission of dreams stay in the light don't dream

    redlady ......indeed he comes to clean the wrongdoers and
    wash them away from earth to the underworld of corrupted
    souls so he now enter da dreams of the human mind
    he's afraid of the light

    brutha khasm...........he's worse then an boogieman
    more deadly then the night of hell and powerful the
    jeepers creeper he's da underworld death angel entering
    da dreamland of human kind

    ujima...........word up he's like da shadows and darkness
    ova da land is his power

    Thankz everyone for the twisted mental dream catcher of
    the underground of darkness who looms the land of dreams
     
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    yes i know Brother Rich
    on a serious note
    I feel you on this
    Eyes wide open
    you feeding the mind
    dropping clues
    much love to you :grouphug:
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed Bluewater
    but the blind eye & def ear not see nor hear
    for the rude awakening is near inside da dreams
    da light is his fear and must be stoped
    only one holds the key but who is this one ?

    for the tales of da crypt unfolds
     
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    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh this was off the chain........

    "Oh he can come into my dreams,
    but I will ova power him
    cuz my faith these days is stronger..."

    Again... this poem was bangin.. very nice flo.... as always
     
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