Quiet Poetry Lounge : Da underworld Apocalyptic

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Oct 15, 2004.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    Deep down under
    a thousand more years
    fragments of power loom
    the fear of blood lust
    anarchy all wasted on
    da millions of voices crying
    in unison reasons of call
    lost in the tempest pools
    drowning in da dark age
    desires the pits flame
    nothing the same as u walk
    through da fire !
    one more lost angel to stir
    the darken embers
    unfrozen December
    calling da distance
    of corruption the joy of
    betrayal and disorder souls
    embedded in the tempest
    tomb of da evil
    meanwhile the pain of
    melancholy falls descending
    the fetal of shapen shades
    of darkness ova casting light
    one so call self faith of this
    world soon to fade
    da shadow walks behind u
    embraced da dark fear of
    da underworld
    as oblivion near
    the world still cry out
    u can hear it and smell
    the fourty funks
    to late for da tormented soul
    cage in the coal black steel
    only da spirit levels from da
    feverish pits as beckoning
    uplift the lid of destructional
    underworld Apocalyptic
    :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :devil: :grin: :devil: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Aug 26, 2003
    Messages:
    12,660
    Likes Received:
    191
    Location:
    somewhere ova da rainbow....
    Ratings:
    +219
    wow ok u took me deep in this
    some heavy stuff speaking loud
    tight mental.....

    peace
    angel
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    WELCOME TO DA UNDERWORLD !!!Thankz sista for the drive by.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    for the red october of holloween spur up from da ground
    and the sounds of nightmares cascade out to the world
    it's from da underworld ........!
     
  5. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jan 24, 2004
    Messages:
    7,007
    Likes Received:
    160
    Occupation:
    day care provider (own business)
    Location:
    Brick City
    Ratings:
    +161
    I think I'll stay inside, don't want to hear nothing from "under" the ground :glasses:
    But I like that and it may hold weight. thanks for sharing this with us..
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    sometime it can shake u out ya bed and pour into the city street
    Da underworld arise again from da pits of destruction to ova cast
    da cold wet shadow lurking in the night.

    Thankz Queen for the stop in at the helms of darkness .............
     
  7. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Sep 12, 2002
    Messages:
    875
    Likes Received:
    10
    Occupation:
    Recording artist and Business Man...so lets do it
    Location:
    Shaolin,New York
    Ratings:
    +10
    lost in the tempest pools
    drowning in da dark age
    desires the pits flame
    nothing the same as u walk
    through da fire !
    one more lost angel to stir
    the darken embers
    unfrozen December



    i like that part most Rich man.....
    nice flow in this too....
     
  8. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Nov 7, 2003
    Messages:
    2,621
    Likes Received:
    42
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Teacher
    Location:
    Baltimore Md
    Ratings:
    +42
    Rich u taking it to the bridge and the Bridge is not over as I can see! :welldone:
    You always bring it brother....... :hearthis:
     
  9. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jan 14, 2003
    Messages:
    6,642
    Likes Received:
    541
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Poet
    Location:
    The Lone-Star State
    Ratings:
    +606
    Revelations as only your staccato style can bring it... THE BOMB!!!
     
  10. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    hey LURK thankz a million from Da underworld

    python what's up man u know when the pits open da underworld rise
    to destruction thankz

    1poet man thankz a million coz when the death trap is on the underworld
    opens for souls
     
Loading...