Black Poetry : Da Underworld 054

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da spell been cast
    da moment has passed
    the boiling point
    dem to da lier
    the red roots of soul
    as the warth now control
    lights out
    darkness cover
    moving in faster
    the smell of corps
    da tale of betrayal
    054
    da underworld of
    da death angel
    has place'd eyez
    on u and the fear
    is now reality
    da crossroad is
    the pits of darkness
    the twisted mental
    play only to self
    theirs no return :nono:
    upon da landz
    which u walk
    da shadows follow close
    the image not of u but
    the seeker of souls
    now in the hood
    of corruption who disrupt
    the affects of da power
    the underworld is here
    walking side u
    not even the light can
    save u now
    beware u have been cast a spell upon
    from the 054 underworld of destruction
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you really know how to set the
    stage for a sinister piece...
    your captured the imagery
    and tone quite well...
    feeling your flow
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Waiting safe inside with all the lights on....chill in that air.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is so deep
    a thriller novel
    i wont turn out the
    lamps i tell you
    i will sleep with
    the light on....
    and gonna go out
    and buy extra bulbs
    and some candles......
    Peace
    My brother
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dizamn bruh.

    Does someone need a hug?

    Got me lookin' out my window with all the lights on.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    angelicsage da ground spreads
    da smell of thousand year released
    the dark shadow of red eyez awaken
    seeking da prey of betrayal a spell
    was cast now the feast begin

    watz ..it's very cold and dark
    souls no longer safe as the spell
    was cast from the underworld

    angel ..it may play out as a novel
    but it's real the rumble of corps funk
    is in da air and the seeker eyez on
    da prey the big strike coming sooner
    as the spell is cast

    positivemindset........indeed da darkness
    has full control a hug can't help the twisted
    tongues of corruption and betrayal now face
    the pits of the underworld

    Thankz all for the drop inside 054 underworld
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Teach on my brother I love this :thanks:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    my sistah ......
    the calling of the sinners
    now have to face the lies
    all there corruption and
    twisted tongues of speech
    da underworld here to
    make dat change to the
    motal souls

    thankz for the visit to the underworld
     
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    this was nasty
    like d!ck dastardly...
    i hear you
    sinners must repent....
    one love
    khasm
     
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    indeed making a clean sweep
    to take back the corruption

    thanks for the visit and support to da underworld
     
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