Black Poetry : Da unchange hand of SACRIFICIAL

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I've wave'd in thy slumber to give u me

    and i should like to live at your feet
    inside thy armz i forth could die in thee embrace

    I have surrendered my whole unconditionally
    and all my individuality and very essence of my beings
    unto u i'd given thy body again and again
    so thee may knowth of me and thy loveth i giveth

    Forth art my love whom so set thee in my time
    we shared mentally in a rapturing venture of nudity
    as i stand naked i cry tears in pieces of da dropplettz
    is of you and all da hoarding of my imagination been laid
    upon thy breast and by reasons untold nor touched

    Here i scrificing de'vor and love which u have penetrated
    in da depth of love and caring my soul now moves as u
    my feeling of emotions has slip away in thou place of vived
    more love i could not hold forth u runs like water in my mind
    thy heart opens as a cave and de armz spread wide as nifty
    seas of bayz as my love pour it's liuqid lava so lavish

    let me sacrific something un-normal yet real un-heard of
    yet lovely and brandish your heart unto me unconditional
    fortn i am he whom sought ya everlasting
    cometh unto me as u are forth art i am there awaiting thee
    I stand , I stand behold me !
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$


    Wassup, man with the steady hand
    Slow hands and BIG BANG
    I'm here to lend a hand
    In awe of what you bring... :great:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz bruh a million tymes and likewise upon u poet
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    man

    i can't be mad at you playa

    you putting it all on the line man

    get for what you know

    lol

    peace $$$RICH$$$

    you coming on strong
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This scribe as so vivid, your words seem to leap off of the page. Passionately written.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u know how dat be so'ja thankz for da visit

    wow watz thank u sometime words leap and bound through expression
    a vow or thy love
     
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