Black Poetry : Da Submission A Production by $$Rich$$ & Angel*

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Angel


    My mind surrenders
    Passive in my thoughts
    As my submission begins
    My pride is laid to rest
    Comfort in my soul as
    I opened my heart
    To feel your love taken over
    I have no where to hide
    Just taken it in stride
    Lay me down..cover my soul
    Caress my thighs
    Invade my spirit
    Taste my lips
    Heaven's bliss
    With one kiss
    My desire is not lust
    Fold and mold
    Pat and tap
    Misty loving under the moon
    Shadows of you and I dancing
    Romance of fine pleasure
    Within every measure
    Take your treasure
    Black pearl of essence
    Purple heart of gold
    Take your lily diamond
    Feed me your lovin
    My body yearns
    Look in my eyes
    Compassion ally
    Seductive
    The honey runs..as you
    Fingertip play my body falls
    Under your spell and
    Releases me from the dark
    And move me to Ecstasy
    Watch my love come down
    Shower you with passion heat
    As the drum beat….plays
    Flowing cross a summer breeze
    Into cascading orbs
    Relax with ease
    Take my desires
    Higher
    ……….higher
    Deeper we become
    Still in the night
    Deeper
    As we mix
    Baby, I want you…
    Deeper we go
    No shame
    No one to blame
    Let your love come


    $$RICH$$

    From da depth of beings
    my desires lay open seeking
    and wishing into ya reasons
    as my silent vows is whispered
    as we drift deep into our own
    exsistance of compassion
    my love roams da soul and
    cascade in the orbs
    of ya body
    the heated desires yearn
    in a distance
    i burn yet my
    motion of feelings caress us
    together upon the bed we lay
    in affectional bliss
    tongue twistin
    kissin bringing erotic meassures
    and moaning pleasures of a sexual
    break through my love lingers heavy
    as i flip and dip strip and ride from
    side to side buckin
    watching ya eyes
    roll back and toes curl swriling in my
    submission of bliss steamy hot juices
    flow wetness grow making a milkyway
    as i fingertip play
    rubbing down da center
    tongue lash deeper
    to a swell as we cross
    into the slumber of love
    as we mixing
    bodies da starz dem and moon shy way
    from my hot sexy play on ya swaying hips
    spreading waving slow rockin n' rollin
    folding and molding strolling deep
    tasting ya core of ya bittersweet
    making u feel da depth of passion
    as u open to partake in a lovin maze
    blazzin u madly
    correctly and compassionally
    under da glow of candles and on the flower
    of a rose i pose dis shaft to enter as a give
    away and lay until u surrender in a massive
    mold of my blissin erotic extreme tame
    say my name ! say my name !


    Angel
    We mix in love
    and float into a submission...
    Say my name ! Rich
    .......Say my name !
    mmmmmmm Richie Rich !


    $$RICH$$ and Angel* Production
    (C) 2004 Galaxy Extreme
     
  2. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:

    Whew! If it gets any hotter in this
    piece, my retinas is gonna burn
    right out it's sockets!!!! whew!!!

    (fanning self)
    Hot piece! :flame:

    Tight drop!!! :bomb:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Keep rolling in those flames, as always a hot release.
     
  4. Keita Kenyatta

    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    This was so nice it got me wondering if yall ain't producing more than poetry !
    LOL ! No really...both of yall are good together ! Give me some more of this !
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    big thankz purple for the cool off but it hot in here take off all ya .......

    thankz watz the fire is burning big wooooweeeee!

    thankz keita man we be extreme and red hot more to come indeed

    big up from the both of us to u wit/luv family
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Surrendering words, with no where to run and hide. :love: No, No when love calls there is no where to run and hide. MzBlk, your words flow very nice in this. I really enjoyed reading.

    Brother $$RICH$$ I expected no less. Again you are gracing the page with lyrical flow. This was a great collab.. :bomb: you know
    !
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    big thankz brutha HODEE coz u can bring it deep ya self
    we both thank u from the (DA galaxy of love's extreme)
     
  8. Alkebulan

    Alkebulan Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whew!

    mzblkangel & rich: i hd 2 read tht breeze part 3 times jus 2 cool off a little bit. r angels allowed 2 um.......nvrmind, it's prob betta f i don't kno. :wink:

    u guys got tht merge thang dwn, doncha? this is wht comes from heartfelt cooperation & mutual respect, w a heap o good :love: in thrown in.

    nice flow mba & rich ;)

    :toast: (u kno i gotz 2 get my drink on afta that)
     
  9. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wonderful work, I enjoyed reading this very much and hope to read more.
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alkebulan..we both thank you for the love and support its only the start of something bigger!!!!! happy you enjoyed. ps alke..yes its betta ya dont know :wink:

    queentswana... RED ALERT!!!! more to come indeed....we both thank you for your loving support


    with love we thank you both for the love shown to us
     
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