Khasm13 : da stroll...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    yo...come with me and let's take this stroll
    cause i'm bout to take you deep
    deeper then my cereal bowl
    i gotta knock this gigantic hole to pancake tricky trolls
    while gaining pivotable position like pole
    so yo...let's take this stroll...let's take this stroll...
    past da grassy knoll...

    dolly is always worried about dollas
    fuuk a man thas blue collers
    he aint got ish to make her holla
    he's just a bother
    cause dolly has a lot of...self-esteem and class
    no obsticle is too high for her to get past
    she changed her style way too fast
    some considered her crass
    an uptight ***
    but she has set standards
    it's what she demanded of her-self
    a man with wealth...and prestege
    most men were not in her league
    so she went after pro sports personel
    only these cats could make her yell
    and moan in desire...only the loot could take her higher
    the more loot stacks...the quicker she would hit the sacks
    greenbacks was her goddess
    and she wasn't modest...about this fact
    green was the color...not white yellow brown or black
    some of her girls thought she was wack
    for acting like that
    but she paid them no concern
    cause she always had loot to burn
    money earnin...her needs where always yearning
    for prada and fendi
    saying to herself...so what if he has other women
    he spends most of his money on me
    on benjamin franklins bald dome she would rub her coochie
    repeatedly...
    on this journey...i saw dolly...and she saw me

    hmmm...i wonder who i will see next
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte twist in effect flow on !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was into this drop about Dolly who is all about the cash. Looking forward to who you'll tell us about next, flow on.
     
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    Straight up awesome flowin, brothah Khasm. :weights:
     
  5. Khasm13

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    on this surreal journey...i'll take you to our next stop
    i was chillin on the L listening to some old doo-wop
    when i saw this cat tim
    he was slim like milk thas skim and mild mannered
    he spent 3 days a week at the health club in the tanner
    to get that golden skin glow
    but what others didn't know
    is that this dude downloads child porn
    like opera singers sing figero
    his mental was sick...42..a bachelor
    too afraid to talk to a grown woman and stick...faster and faster
    key strokes matched his d*** as he stroked
    off of the images of minors...lil wee wee's and tiny vagina's
    he had it real bad...been doing this for 15 years...and it was real sad
    volumes and volumes of kiddy porn in all of his rooms
    of course it was camoflauged...just like his johnson that got hard
    when he would past by the elementary schools
    somedays he would take 2 hour lunches and drool
    looking at the children play...too wrapped up...not even looking his way
    until oneday...the urges got too much for him to take
    so he lured a lil gurl with candy to his car...then took her to the lake
    like a dog salavating over a juicy steak...his dreams became reality
    with the moral and ethical codes behind his actions a sheer formality
    two weeks later they found the gurls naked, tattered and torn body on the desolate beach
    the police report stated the last person to see her alive was her 2nd grade teach
    at 7 years old... she didn't know how to swim or had the strength to break free
    but that day on the L...i saw tim...and tim saw me....

    i wonder who next will i see
     
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    on the way to my next destination
    i saw a baglady named louise
    huddled outside a gas station
    blocking the chill of the wind
    it was cold as he!!...but she had a crazed grin
    how did she get to this point in this state in time?
    i looked in her eyes...shuttered for a second...then saw it in her eyes....

    she was once a lovely housewife
    taking care of her family...making sure she was a good wife
    she had 2 boys and one girl
    b4 they went hungry...she would sacrifice her whole world
    cause thas the type of woman she was
    but her husband was a different story
    everyday this cat was riding a buzz
    from intoxication...and when he got that way
    he lacked tolerance and a lot of patience
    he wasn't always like that...but the stress of taking care of 4 people
    had him cornered in a dark alley with his back
    up against the wall...he would drink old grand dad in a tall
    glass...at the bar after work...then go to get gas
    always the last....one home...wife always calling him on the phone
    when you come'n home?
    i'll be there when i get there
    looking at the bar mirror with a drunken stare
    and when he finally got there
    over the little things...he would beat her @ss
    like he didn't care
    the kidz would see this and get scared
    and run to their rooms
    cause they knew when he had too much liquor to consume
    he turned into a villian like dr. doom
    acts like this happened at least twice a week
    crackin a rib here and a bruised up cheek
    this was a terrorhome much worse then mad max and the terrordome
    everyone walked on pins and needles and tried not to get caught alone
    with big papa...louise would have nightmares...and never called the coppers
    she kept taking the punishment...trying to hold the family together
    cause the love that she had was intense
    her burden was way too much for her bear
    she snapped...when her kidz was at the county fair
    her husband came home drunk
    smellin like cigarettes, cheap perfume and a skunk
    try'n that same ish...cause his food wasn't ready
    but louise had taken her great great grand dads suga cane choppin machete
    from the attic and swung.....there was air were his head and hair should be
    they took her kidz and put them in child service
    louise was away for 22 years for murders
    she murdered her husband and she murdered a mental slave
    with one stroke from a machete blade...
    but the cost was losing her children
    and this drove her insane....
    now she walks the streets in blistered feets
    try'n to pump gas for people on e
    on this day in the windy city
    i saw louise and louise saw me...

    i wonder who else will i see....
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm...this was deep
    for we never "truly" know another's story
    ...or even, another's struggle
    sometimes it's hard when your life is cushy
    and drama free...to try and see life
    through anothers eyes...

    this was compelling and full of dramatic illustrations

    ...this would make a great short story

    Excellent work my brother!
     
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    Wow, Khasm you keep taking us in deep into these complicated lives. You know if I didn't happen to peek in at the other responses, I won't have realized you continued this in the same thread. And I would have missed out on these additional entries. You really know how to tell a story.
     
  9. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    These are just stories right? ...I sure hope so ...and if so, this is an awesome write up, it pulled me in deep.
    altho the second one made my blood boil.
     
  10. Khasm13

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    thanks brotha rich for da props

    thanks sista gempis...i gotta keep my weight up

    thanks sista sage...if i ever get the time to write like i wanna write...i do have some ammo...:)

    thanks sista watz...yeah...ima take you deeper still...i don't write for the praise, i write to just write...if people peek in they do...if not...life goes on...i do a lot of poems this way...it's like continue'n a thought...plus, i knew i would be writing a lot of these...i aint try'n to take someone else space here...thanks for da luv

    thanks sista qt...lol...yeah, they are just stories...i have a vivid imagination...too vivid at times...fluffy bunny stories just aren't my thing...lol...i like to tackle the stuff most poets don't talk about...;)...that second one i got from a news article last week...these people are out there...beware...thanks sis

    one love
    khasm
     
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