Black Poetry : Da STREETZ

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  1. $$RICH$$

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    Like four corner hustler
    out there every busta
    selling , pimpin mothers
    gun blazin brothers

    Father's now lost control
    from da new wave street mold
    Children hope begin to fold
    u see there's no pot of gold

    Through the urban life of struggle
    poverty deeper like an muzzle
    no unity to unite
    just da hustling corner fight

    Missions uncomplete
    jobless people mental feat
    homeless no food to eat
    i'm talking bout dem streetz
    why have thy forsaken me

    Broken brotherhood
    stolen souls
    mix feelins greed going on
    nothing in da hood is right
    from sun up til moon light

    All u hear is silent screams
    broken promises and sour dreams
    deep cry from thy people
    no one playin as team
    sadly maze of da streetz
    nothing good come from thee


    Get our sons & daughter off da streetz
    where's your child at and what are they doing
    death comes like da devil who's chewing
    something surely is brewing in da st. soup !

    :bye:
     
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    that was some powerful work rich
    i was feeling the message
    u laid this down


    Missions uncomplete
    jobless people mental feat
    homeless no food to eat
    i'm talking bout dem streetz
    why have thy forsaken me
    ^^^
    fav part

    7.5/10
    uno
     
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    raising the awareness i see keep it going my brotha.
     
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    $$RICH$$ WE GOTTA BE AWARE THATS OUR FUTURE AND OUR LOVE , I LOVE YOUR FLO BABY SPEAKING REAL TRUTH
    MUCH MUCH LOVE SWEETTEE29
     
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    Thankz Tantrum for the love and visit bruh !

    yes Nevar raising da bars to reality big thankz sis for feeling me

    surely do sweetee29 we truely do and be very aware thankz sis.
     
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    $$RICH$$:
    Spittn' that STREET truth.
    NIce drop.

    Much luv
     
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    thankz a million 4EVERLUV for the visit .
     
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    re: hi

    good-afternoon $$RICH$$,


    had to check out one of your poems before logging off...


    ==
    ==
    Broken brotherhood
    stolen souls

    mix feelins greed going on
    nothing in da hood is right
    from sun up til moon light

    All u hear is silent screams
    broken promises and sour dreams

    deep cry from thy people
    no one playin as team
    sadly maze of da streetz
    nothing good come from thee
    ==
    ==


    thy message is here for all to take in... still sadly many brothers have chosen that path and believing the streets is were it's at... willing and able to gang bang, sell drugs, or just hustle in reality... then there are the sisters who rather live ghetto fab, instead of looking at the bigger picture... ( aka... getting an education, moving out the hood, etc... ) no one stays young forever, as some say we are losing a generation of kings/queens... in all i could say more, yet broke it down my brother...


    have a nice day...


    sincerely,
    c.t.adams-///
     
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    yes indeed so true we are losing our next generation of Kingz & Queenz
    thank you for that splat of reply that caps the piece i bring in message.
    peace & love brother Mrafrica
     
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