Black Poetry : Da song imma gone sang...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Jan 14, 2002.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm gone sang dis song
    cause some peoples out there
    be needing sum good ole
    harmony to survive
    dis thang we calls life

    see i calls it hell cause dats all
    it seems to give / me but i survive
    and enjoy the moments when hell
    smells like fresh sprang mornin'
    flowas / you know dem kind
    dat have those pretty lil' purple
    petals on dem /

    you know those kinds lil
    childrens be pickin' and givin'
    to grandma on sunday church mornin's

    i'm gone sang dis song
    cause some peoples be needing to
    cry and jus' release let dat
    "hell" stuff go and soak their face in the
    sun // yeah this
    song is gone be...gone be....gone be
    (what's dat wurd? oh yeah)

    dis song i'm gone sang is gone be
    "meloncholy" dat's sad you know
    it's gone sound like aching bones
    and waking eyes and so' muscles
    and tired feets dis gone be a sad song

    i'm gone sang dis song cause
    sad makes you go "deaf"
    birds seem to not talk no more
    the wind goes by without saying
    a word and the day passes you
    by acting like you in the way

    so i'm gone sang dis song to
    make peoples cry and smile all
    at the same time

    life be totally what you make it
    it can be a risin' sun or a newborn breathe
    if you choose to take it

    life can be blueberry muffins in the
    mornin' or chirpin' birds
    life can be the hope in a preachers
    words

    life is what you make it...


    well that's a far as I had got
    and when i'm done i'm gone
    sang this song to ev'rybodys
    cause ev'rybodys got to live
    to smile or life gone be hell.

    (c)2002 blakverb
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    VERB

    WE B FAMILY GOT ALL MY BRU & SISTAHS WIT ME
    SO SING IT
    SING IT
    2 ME DA SONG OF LIFE :)
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak

    You soooooo Cra-Z !! :D I lovedid this piece ..... (I thought I heard two little hound dogs in da back howlin' while you was signin' tho'.... you might wanna check em' :lol:


    N2
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak,

    I love this. Go'on sang dat song. You have listening ears. :)

    Madd Sistahly Love
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Royal BLaK-NeSs.


    there you go again... makin' a sistah wish she could get
    inside that mental of yours... if only for one **** day!! :)

    i loved the flava... the dialect... keep on sangin' poet!

    :heart:
    Ga~
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Verb...

    Man, you are crazy off the top!!!

    It's sickening :puke: your talent!

    :peace: w/respect
    GQ
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo Blak

    Sing yo song bruh!:eek:
     
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    ... i'll harmonize the melacholy tune...
    BEAUTIFUL peace--
    i love going back to the color purple
    where life don't hafta be so **** blue!
    -7 :spinstar:
     
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    Twin, i ani't got no words fro this scribe cuz i'm tryin' to picture you on the front porch with a straw hat on singing this piece...

    this scribe is tight bro...
     
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    kinfolks,

    Imma gon keep on sanging, cause ya'lls inspires me. I just be needing some mo' times to finish my song. see my screen door be creakin' and disturbin' my country flow (ya'll didn't know I gots Valdosta roots). but imma gon sang anyways. ya'll jus' vote for me when the grammys come arounds. thank ya kindly.

    peace to ya
    blak
     
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