Khasm13 : da small man in an angry land...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    in a land of anger and pain
    lived a small man with big blame
    it seems this world blamed him for violent blood stains
    always under attak and for the lack of gain
    he and his people have made
    when really the source of the problem was green like jade
    da small man in a crowd would fade.......to oblivion
    cause of the times he was living in
    his status was itty bitty in da city and
    it seemed too always get worse
    big guys with even bigger lies always seemed first
    he was young when realities of his dreams first got burst
    like a soapy bubble...he learned this cold world
    doesn't like to cuddle...no foreplay either
    just da raw deal....each time he would greet her(land of liberty)
    she would act like he was try'n to beat her
    and scream bloody rape...quick to pull da drape
    over his watered eyes...as his physical body was assulted by spies
    every time
    each and every time
    so much so
    his stature kept getting smaller...as his mental was kept in a bind
    steadily behind...this hulkish land took him for slo in da mind
    so he chose to recline in his small apartment and drink wine
    staying away from beast that pray to a hellish shrine
    this cat eventually shrunk to levels microscopic
    he couldn't stop it
    in this angry land where race is always the bottom topic....
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop my brother...enjoyed your creative juices as always

    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man o' man!!!
    You're just like a (black) glass ball full of creativity and energy, emotions and feelings flowing in it, constantly in motion.
    You always seems to make your thoughts and feelings so clear to the rest of the world.
    This was tyte...
    moham
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow, i get it. a creative approach to the black mans struggle in america. i gotta give it to ya brother you laid it down
     
  5. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Khasm,
    that was deep, it was deep enough to move me. It seen more like I seen it instead of reading it. it was captured very well.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And the world tries to dissolve the black man, but kings will never quite dissappear. I feel the vibe.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome drop KING are forever this was too smooth
     
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    I do adore the way your masterful mind works
    One can only wonder the inspiration behind the poets pen
    indeed brotha you are a divine gift manifest
    may we never know what it is to be without your voice
    :)
     
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    Bro. Khasm, this is the ish my mind's been starvin' 4.

    I completely dig how U laid this down.

    Peace.
     
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