Black Poetry : DA RIGHT ONE

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  1. rapchild

    rapchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SOMETHING OLD N SOMETHING SHORT.


    they say what make a man is all da bull**** he been through
    so me bein younger than you
    or older than you
    shouldnt really bother you
    age will always be a figure
    we all got different shapes n sizes big,skinny n some r thicker
    girl my life has been hell on earth like da 9/11
    u and only u in my life might be my heaven
    baby all i ask is open ur heart n i will step in
    now the question is im i makin sence in ur mind
    or im wastin my time
    n a true n a real girl who understands me is someone i will neva find
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I'm sure u will in due time
    that one love sweet soul
    ya heart will find ......Tyte joint
     
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    I wanna hear the anser to this--you make good points--in the old school we always said "compared to what" because everythingt is relative--it just depends upon your point of view and your attitude--Amun-Ra
     
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    It's not so much the age, but the experiences one has weathered, tis true. Can't just look at one factor to determine one's fabric. Much said with few words poet.
     
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    Don't give up yet! It takes a bunch of wrongs before we find da right one, but patience is the key. Nice Word.
     
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    KEEP HOPE ALIVE!!!!

    Don't give yet!!
    She'll come yr way.
    Stay positive
    Love this drop.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yo

    you're on to something poet

    and keep hope alive
    there is a female
    who can hang with you trust me

    peace
     
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    rapchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks y'all
     
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