Quiet Poetry Lounge : Da Remix Pt.II Her Glow ::

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Enhanced by the beauty
    her shine is divine & fruity
    i've savored the glist inside
    my everlasting from her soul
    glowing on the spread daily

    As it uncover in the mystery
    my walls crumble at sight of
    her beaming glow and soulace
    re-de-fine my heart in awe
    not because she taken , but !
    because i love her so openly

    I have dance in her moon
    and cross into the starz beyond
    cosmos with passionate love
    offering me unconditionally at quest
    her fragile charm i savor in the depth
    of my realism cascading to a warmth
    my body call back unto her
    she like a mermaid of love and a dream
    i scream for as my love pour the liquid

    I've came to an confession of passion
    and stain the page again with drips of
    ink that say lovin is my scorn & commander
    and i so loveth thee in recognition beauty
    and protect the glow i savor within me
    through the halos peek a maze untouched
    as my handz yet i feel her in the structure
    of my mind , she feel so warm and good
    is when my tears speaks boldly

    Joyously into the morning crossin the
    airedale gulps and her glow of light
    explodes ova fields wit infinite romance
    my loveth i take u in deeper and deeper
    i have this desire of cares and lone to
    bath u in my trust and holla the truth
    as i wash u in my loyality and beloved
    i've grace u in the savor that enhance
    ya inner beings and i know that u are

    Allow me to now hammock deep
    from your sway and river into my
    slumber of sleep as i dreameth of
    thee and place u in my morning visional
    maze of love forth i adore you
    you have become my daily prayer
    and the toast of my love a treasure
    and my Queeneth un-nounced yet known
    I loveth u as alwayz

    ya warth of love from above in flyte .
    through your eyez lay my mysteriously
    rose in a ininhibited way of embrace and
    through ya eyez enlighten my universe
    unfolding the flower of a SOULFUL LOVE
    A WOMAN, MY QUEEN , THIS GLORY....
     
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    As her glow enhances you, your glow enhances her, thus creating a radiant beam eternal. This was so beautiful my brotha....wow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz Watz as it enhances wit radiant glist the vow become
    a beam of light that never dem a glow of love that live within da
    heart and with every musical note spoken in ink it kisses soulfully.
     
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    And jus when I thought it couldn't get any better than the original it does. This is amazing I would love to know whatis bringing forht this love in you . Whatever it is I hope it continues to inspire you more. If I could give this type of inspiration I certainly wouldn't stop because is awe inspiring.
     
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    you took me away suga this was deep and refreshing to know a love as this
    savoring on every word you know i want more right this is up on the wall :kiss2: ...now ummm can i get more...Peace Angel
     
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    Thankz soulful2006 .....what bring such beauty is within the depth
    of my soul i pose and it's part of who i am so this will alwayz be...


    Thankz Angel surely u can get more as i feel a new wave coming on
    as i pen it down stay tune for the RAPTURE version .......................
     
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    She illuminates our minds forever now, Bro. RICH.
     
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    thankz word up 1poet sho ya right have me dancing
    in her radiant glow ..........
     
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    write ...

    depth of you..








    continue expressing .....
    always..






    beautifull piece Rich :heart:








    LoveAuroraflower:heart:
     
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    RAPTURE version ??? did i miss it?
     
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