Black Poetry : Da REMIX pt.II For U I Will !!

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    seem like u ready
    as my heart rock steady
    on waves of ya soul
    to keep u warm
    away from da cold

    what seem broken
    i'll mend and blend
    to perfection wit
    sweet lovin affection
    to caress u in my
    craddle of cuddles
    be that simple lover

    For u i will, just call on me
    when u feel for a pain free
    affair one with tender care
    to share openly i will dear
    come in a hurry, so stop ya
    worry i'll be alwayz & forever
    through storms, blizzards, any
    kind of weather i'll lay down 4 u

    step into my world
    let me sho u gurl & take u
    to a place where only lovers go
    where only compassion sho
    the place hearts desireslone to
    know let me take u there cause
    for u i will thrill

    i will fight da war inside yo battle
    to earn ya heart to make a start
    where two mental enterwine in a
    delightful shine of togetherness
    don't be afraid cause tonight i'll
    make u my woman to kiss da feelings
    deep and play for keeps for u i will..

    seal joy and catch every star
    sho the world a Queen of heart
    and plung my love into yours to
    protect it with care and bare all
    witness who loomz our mist

    when u feel low, movin slow
    need a lift a hug to go
    need a ear a hand to float
    call me i'm one click u know
    i am direct da power of respect
    the comfort and caress the King
    of happiness to ya day the one
    who will forever stay

    Two steps come my way i will
    be all u dream the one never seen
    the body to cling as i sing (I love u)
    in whispers for u my love i will seal
    fate and captivate, compromise
    and leave the unknown just call me
    from above the man of love
    yo everything u can dream

    I wanna be he , de King
    I wanna be that one
    who pull yo heart string
    the body to cling too
    the voice to sing to u
    that wonder of love u lone for
    i am the mystery of ya secret
    like silent windz and still air
    the care that moves deep
    the kind that rock u to sleep
    the love to keep as it sweep
    you off ya feet the morning light
    to ya day and the handz that go
    12 play see belove for u i will
    as i seal this request II my luv 4 u
    is so true and new no need to be
    blue because mines like glue........


    A Dyamondluv Remix II
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You will ...for me?

    You're willing to face, the storms and rain...
    but can you manage to deal with all my pain?

    I need the kinda love that you're willing to share
    so my whole heart and soul...I'm about to bare

    I surely need you, both night and day
    and not just someone, who wants to play

    My heart is so damaged, and in need of repair
    I have to be sure that ...you'll always be there

    Not just mere words, that flow from the mouth...
    cause that's not what my life is all about

    Do you really want me to ..."step into your world"?
    be your Queen of the nile ... your beautiful Pearl ?

    Can you crawl on my mind, and just lay for a while
    it would bring my spirit and soul to a smile

    but

    Can you tear down these walls, that's been up for so long?
    It's layers and layers, of being done so wrong

    What you have for me ....man, I really need it
    but how will I know, you'll never decieve it?

    cause...

    I have not the strength, to build another wall...
    so please know what you're doing, before you make that call!!
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You caught me up agaiin I got lost in you and your words reading this you must stop doing that to me lol just kidding you did'nt know how much your words captivated me but now you do. This onen is a prime example of how you do.
     
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    bravaaa.. bravaaaa

    LOVED IT.. KUDOS TO THE WOMAN THAT MAKES YOUR HEART CRY OUT IN POETRY MY BROTHA.
     
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    If you will, then she shall, be the woman that you desire, be the woman you need....Dios mio, the emotion here was piercing....whew....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    aweeeee......soulful2006 did i do that !
    thank you so much from da heart so happy u can river deep into
    my mindful grace and feel me ...I hope i can continue to reach in.

    Thank you poeticmanifesta it's the love i have to share and maybe
    someday she will realize it and feel it as i do big thankz

    Thankz Watz indeed yes indeed i will again and again da emotions flowin
    on high waves if one can take the power of this love .......
     
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    now Queentswana .............

    let my heart start by saying
    this love is not playing it want
    to pull in all ya pain to replace it
    with cares to bare and know i'll
    forever be their just the same

    for u i will , wit grace and feel
    to rebuild the joy & thrill
    from the stain u bare sho u my
    tender lovin care to wrap in
    be that lover , brutha & friend
    repair whatever need be mend
    listen intently know ya worth
    break down the trouble curse

    I speak from da soul and line
    every word from the depth of heart
    where true love & harmony start
    not from the tongue that lie
    enter my world let's us fly to that
    place where only love know for u i will !

    open the door to ya mental
    and feel my humble gentle beings
    let ya mind race in comfort for i will
    be there to share that smile
    i'm da starz u see at night
    the moon that glist like sun light
    to see u through be the one
    u can lean on for u i will carry on
    so our spirits touch like heaven's
    u need not any strength forth I AM !
    and da wall that fall of my love's call
    will be pure & true for u i will & my
    heart don't lie nor play it's here to stay

    I will , I will for u I will ........................
     
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    stay tune for pt.3 .....( Da closure of i will confession )
     
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    Sure sounds powerful, but I think one can take it...Looking forward to part 3....
     
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    Thank you as it all spool together , it's coming !
     
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