Quiet Poetry Lounge : Da proposal

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet candles flickers rapidly
    eyez sparkle beyond it's flame
    soft musical tunes fill da air
    two wit tender enchanted care
    speaking in whispers
    standing all alone at da alter
    words of love spoken softly
    with a melodic beat
    entering her heart his soul
    he gives her one red rose
    and pledges his devotion
    she gives him her heart key
    mirrored da emotions
    he take her hand unto his
    place a black velvet box in
    her plam she struggle to
    remain calm
    she open it tenderly
    as he caresses her cheek
    speaking words Godly & meek

    wit dis token ring i de wedd
    my lovin soul & devotion
    soon tears flow like an explosion
    from da brilliant sparkles like starz
    above surely it was love
    again he speak on one knee
    tell me u be my wife for life
    a togetherness in foreverness
    and i shall be blessed
    she gently embrace , place a kiss
    whisper da words baby
    yes yes yes !!!
    down the lane at da alter
    Da proposal of love & laughter
    compassionate transition of
    pleasure to be everlasting
    two souls two lovers :love:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh this was just awesome :blush:

    :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:

    the beauty of two souls for ever in lasting love

    that would be a day to always remember :heart:

    love it!!!! ya know me

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What could be more beautiful than this? Souls of love joining together, pledging their hearts to each other. This is quite a gem.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u sistah Angel indeed one day this will be me at da alter

    so right watz theirs nothing better then love of two souls together
    in a foreverness under GOD'S watchful eye thank u sistah
     
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    Two halves joined together as one whole.. Ain't Black love beautiful?
     
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    tru dat indeed so sweet i just cry coz i love it .
    thankz a million sistah
     
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    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good,
    Good,
    Good three cheers and a Beer for this one
     
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    its from up above....... lol :)

    good work
     
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    thankz my bruthas it's truely from above da man of love
    big ups ..........AACOOLDRE & Lowkey
     
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