Black Poetry : Da proposal

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    :love:
    Down to one knee
    deep in ya eyes i see
    and a heart just for me
    the candle flicker flames
    whispers unto u as i call
    out ya name to claim
    eyes sparkles in it's light
    there's a magic in da air
    moments of forever care
    oh what an enchanted night
    as da moon shine bright
    starz blink in gleam from
    da words my heart sing
    speaking softly deep
    as u cream it's no dream
    u wrap self around da sweet
    melodic tone
    to u my single red rose
    and a piece of my soul
    to pledge my devotion
    that sends ya mind into
    an sexual explosion
    and offer my heart's key
    sweetly will u marrieeeeee me
    as i mirror ya emotions
    taken ya hand making dis stand
    to be ya king ya only black man'
    placin a package in ya palm
    a soft box deep black velvet
    to caress and bless
    opens in shine a sparkling daimond
    brilliant smile as i speak
    feeling u shake and becoming weak
    say that u will be my wife
    to cherish and hold til death depart
    our life , this i will be truely blessed
    so if u will whisper loud my queen
    yes yes yes !!!!! :love: :deal:
    :heart: :spinstar: :heart: :spinstar: :heart: :luvv: :heart: :spinstar: :heart:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow reading this i had thought....to say YES!!

    then came this power to say YES YES!!

    know i may be crazy and need a little help
    the words still came outYES!!!!!

    this was a beautiful scribe very touching
    can ya tell i likes.....:kiss:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now u has confess
    and whisper da word yes
    comes da vow and then
    da rest so get fitted
    ware dat dress come to
    the love a heart to caress
    and feel the magical bless
    of forever happiness

    Thankz sistah angel happy u enjoyed this dip from my knees !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To regally place love's rose upon her altar, so sweetly and so deeply, what queen wouldn't say yes to her king? Of course she would say yes. This was lovely Rich.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm in agreement with all the other sisters...

    This was lovely...^5
     
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    this is such a sweet sentiment...
    maybe oneday i'll have use for such poetry
    used directly ;)....nice brauh...keep it live
    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    show nuff i will be singing this one day fo real ....lol
    thanks watz , sage , Khasm
    hey bruh man i got some lines so they yours when u ready ...!
     
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    indeed all smiles sistah LovelyG the big proposal
    thanks
     
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