Black Poetry : Da power seeker from the underworld 101

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Like a ripple of closed mindz
    da power lurks like a spell
    of directional corruption in da
    hearts of da living where love
    is stain by motal souls
    foul vows and twisted tongues
    create the river of blood to run
    from da cracks of the streets
    loom da darkside awaken to da
    face of prey where no living long
    to be in da depth of it's power

    it carry no journey yet take u
    it offer no ride yet u moving
    into a trap of devilish devor
    of the underworld for the
    cross out artist of pretender
    will be terrifyed of the ultimate
    chillin critically thriller of deep
    discoverydat delivers shadows
    of a doubt into the hearts it will
    da unforgettable tale of the dark

    The domestic disturbance is real
    once awaken the refined maniac
    seek revenge for justic from the age
    of night like sheer terror of the piper
    u can keep yo eyes close look doors
    but forgot to close yo mouth
    so he will still enter ya world of kind
    to a destructional massive blow
    seeking the weakest to the river edge
    on a desolated roadway to hell

    Da darkside of terror is da horror
    of self guilt it pitty noone but the
    light of truth or the wholesome of
    a true soulful heart which da prey
    sho can u imagine not knowing
    or feeling da hit of the sword from
    the pit of death where da moment
    become cold and the sun run into the earth
    as the moon cry da blood or redish orange
    stars twinkle dem and darkness fall upon
    the feet of the land as it open up to the
    face of da UNDERWORLD where the
    death angel rise and come in the black coal
    of fire from the mouth of a betraying soul
    a tongue who created the maniac of darkness
    the handz that laid upon the ink of da pen
    replaced by the script of a tale unspeakable

    the power become more stronger
    of a evil spirit rising upward from
    the groundz as they rumble
    a split of earth open and the no face
    of a chill released to the land to
    watch and take back with strikes
    can u imagine that !!!
    close ya doors tight
    windows down good
    stay in the light
    to be a survivor of the warth
    of the underworld darkside
    let not the cast of the blood
    be the tool of destruction
    nor let the tongue of corruption
    be the weapon of choice
    for the death angel is powerful
    the most weary scary horror is
    as u leap into the light it opens
    the real world of truth up
    and that's da mystery of it all
    it's call false hiding
    and truely da dark wonder will come
    for u that night so be aware of da
    thriller of chillin darkness
    becareful of the light of secured bond
    forth it might go out without notice
    the fire is burnning high in da pits below
    in da darkside underworld of corruption
    beware.....da power.......explosion eruption
    he comes when u not ready
    he seeks u when u least feel him
    he wants revenge on souls
    he's a trap waiting to happen
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow!!!!
    this was chillin
    love the flow as you tale the story
    of the underworld and how the
    rapture can be filled.....
    i likes the flow....work that pen
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems as though the power seeker has lost their way...is this a maze or is the seeker confused? Thought provoking scribe.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    angel
    thanks for the visit to the tales of the underworld
    power of corruptions where is looms on the living

    watz
    it didn't loose it's way
    the seeker is watching
    waiting and ready to enter
    it's more of the power it pose
    on the rage of revenge
    thanks for visiting the power of the underworld
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich... you gonna have me sleepin'
    wit' the lights on tonight :)


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's ok rest ya head
    da true beckon light
    shine on u from the underworld
    thanks for da visit to da world of underground
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so vivid and chilling
    ...write on brother, I'm captivated
    by the new flavor...
    I'm listening...
     
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    angelicsage yes the thriller
    of a chiller tale like da crypt
    of da dark wonder as it seek da
    7 souls to feast on to return unto
    da ground which it came scary
    the power it pose is mindful and
    stronger get more power from the
    weakness of a heart or mind

    stay in da light it fear da light !

    thankz for visiting the power of the underworld
     
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    dude this scribe gave me a chill...
    this reminds me of a house song called
    walk da night...word...
    supa tyte my brotha
    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man khasm i know
    the chilly thing is how
    it awaken from the underworld
    from the tales of da tongue....

    thankz for da visit to the underworld of darkness
     
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