Black Poetry : Da Moment I Write

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    When i am writing
    thou most probably
    art

    thinking of me
    losing all sense
    of motions and
    the horse that
    bears thee,
    in da tenderness
    rememberance
    oh my beloved !

    Da strength
    of thou conception
    and wishies i behold
    my faith in da passage
    on paith to ya love
    but
    I ought not trust myself
    to this senseless and
    visible sheet of paper
    to me thyself i shell
    find da evidence
    of what passing through me

    In thy whole heart i am
    in thy mind i be
    stretched upon da earth
    in thou own involuntary
    sighs and ejaculations
    trembling of hands
    to self knees i bend
    kissing thou lips of
    blessings

    Pronounced my love
    to u like da wind
    softly blowin' inward
    i grasp da notion
    of ya finger tips
    back arching like bloom
    my str8 contour blosom
    and let da voice speak
    upon me as u would
    soon my pen flow
    and on paper i leave
    a spill to fill da void
    of lonelyness
    da emptyness i pose
    so i scribe da vision
    of me & u .....................!

    Part #2 to be continue
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a lovely scribe
    I could never lie

    Verse and rthyme
    Join together
    And birth a melody so sweet

    It's just a treat

    As you let it flow
    Like the rain drizzles
    Against the pane of my window

    And the heat of the fire
    Near a chair
    And book
    Penetrates your soul

    With the life that it breathes
    You have summoned me

    Right out of my comfort
    Into thee

    So wickedly...

    Desert Storm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    once again
    i pose da
    poetic script
    from ya
    erotic lips
    da sweet kiss
    of eterwined
    from ya heart
    into mines
    u and i
    me and u
    together
    in flyght
    da light
    will shine str8 through

    now in da storm
    of ya flow
    here the bliss
    i lone to know
    out my chair
    standing strong
    my love is never
    wrong
    da book i pose
    is gentle as a rose
    so i lay in da mist
    of ya tenderness
    saying .................THANKZ D STORM for da love sis.....let's do dis !
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da moment i write to u i knew we was in love yet poetically
    so now i rest my heart upon u for keepsake
     
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    This one was very shakespearish bruh. I think that is true versatility. Now if you could do it in Japanese then I would really have to throw in my poetic towel.
     
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    I'll bring it to ya in many styles many shapes on many voices
    Japanese........hahahahaha!!!!! i'll try stay tune.
     
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    Dayuuum $R....

    Dawg you be like overflowin' with ya mental skillz....

    On to Part II!!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    RICH!!!

    You betta Mu*** F N Write poet...!!!
    Feelin this flow money~
     
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    MR.M

    I FLOW FROM DA MENTAL OF MY WILD THOUGHTS
    AND IT LAY TO CANVAS LIKE DAT........THANKZ MY BRU.

    DOING IT MY WAY!!!!! off in Flyte>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>:)
     
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    GQ.............man u know when u open up from ya inner thoughts
    thangz flow out like dat............THANKZ BRU.
     
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