Black Poetry : DA MOMENT I WRITE pt.#2

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O' Queen
    how i revel
    inside
    ya warmth
    u bring me
    a taste of
    delicious refreshments
    O' my heart
    be of thirst
    unto ya magical
    juices

    i write da vibe
    of mesmerized
    scribes from
    deeper inside
    every kiss !
    come lay ya lips
    to mines
    begin da way

    While i write
    da last page
    tear after tear
    i fear not yo lovin
    nor ya heart
    i'm plunging deeper

    my pen move
    in motion
    yet i see no words
    just wet spots
    as they drip N' drop !
    da paper say much
    from da hand
    but i can't express
    what's inside my heart

    here on da moonbeam
    that marks da spot
    i write dot 2 dot
    to a clustered rot
    i lay my face unto
    a coiled
    soundly i sleep
    knowing of my royal
    yes i've tasted it
    all that u gave
    man of heart
    in da land we crave

    da generous
    de honourable
    sentiments
    is a delightful
    morsel
    where few , few
    will ever taste
    in any blast
    our love shell last
    I trust in thee
    my faith is high
    soulful u and I
    so from my lips
    that i may dream
    luridly of u
    i say sweetly
    GOOD NIGHT!
    :kiss:
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alright then, write on write on.
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight stuff rich
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    brotherman ....u know i gotta flow on to tell da story......Thankz

    lonelypoet....... pt.#1 was the tip of da hat till i knew
    da flow was within me even when my heart felt love
    thanks a million 4 da read!!!!!!
     
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    Excellent, excellent work my brotha!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    GQ............ just openly i gotta say it ......so one know of my beings
    u know how dat go...............THANKZ man.....
     
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