Black Poetry : Da Moment i know

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da brilliant reasons
    is like my seasons
    delightful and true
    and my love of new

    Resurrecting sweet
    i'm da overwhelming treat
    ur my honeysuckle feast
    colorful burst of excitement

    My heart in pools of warmth
    fulfilling unbearable sizzle
    ur my starz and moon
    a soul of beauty in my room

    Desires cascade in bliss
    we become flames of twist
    our fire of love kiss
    on a cloud of rapid glist

    Standing in da deep meadows
    by da heated visibly stream
    as water spool outward
    like my heart i vow unto u

    When i'm near i feel so good
    as i watch from the spot u stood
    memories bring a naughty pleasure
    from this extreme measure

    Truth now dance and sing
    from all this lovin beauty string
    unveiling da face dat hide
    painted in da depth of mindz

    U see me now so clear
    and how deep and dear
    my spirit cling to ya happiness dream
    fierce pour liquid neptune

    Mellow in play of our delight
    as the mood is now right
    searching your unique nakedness
    in da trench of enhancement joy

    I pray for morrow direction
    and feel the core of ya compassion
    as it lead us in forever affection
    coz my love is from above Ressurection
    :heart: :spinstar: :heart: :spinstar: :heart: :spinstar: :huh: :spinstar: :heart: :spinstar: :heart: :spinstar: :heart
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    at da moment i knew
    that it was you

    who i wanted to Share My World
    like Roger and Zapp I want to be your Girl

    Da moment when i saw your face
    I know the moment i wanted to taste

    the sweetness that you carry
    I knew from da moment it's you I want to marry

    from da moment i saw the love that fills your eyez
    i knew in my heart you didn't wear any disquise

    the true shape the heart showed thru
    the love i feel for you is true

    from Da Moment I knew

    You was the one!!!!!!!!!:wine: :bowdown: :love:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really can't touch this one, it was just that beautiful...wow...perhaps I'll come back with more later, sort of speechless right now...beautiful. Very nice flow back nevar.
     
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    The Brother is laying out
    Letting the ladies know how smooth
    The rythum is hott
    Nice flow Poet
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Nevar...........
    At da moment
    my heart race
    feeling da essence
    of ya soul
    and da depth of orbs
    drifting in my world
    forth thy love i vow
    at your feet
    may i my loveth

    watz.....
    do return in words
    forth my heart lone ya
    essence of beauty
    i vow my loveth unto u
    at the helms of morrow

    Tantrum.....
    man i'm trying to lay it out there
    for her to touch if she only knew me.

    Thankz family for the love & support on this piece.
     
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    PatriceCQueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in case you did not know who responded like that

    Peace

    Patrice
     
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    Ahh the sweet smell of love is in the air. You always express your feelings so well as you did again here
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz PCQueen as i bust the code here .....lol

    thankz phenomenalwoman your words express warmth and grace
    it mean a lot to me .
     
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    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww......


    this is beautifull.....
    when i just readed it...





    i had to think about this song of reberta flack..



    it starts with..



    "'the first time.....








    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
  10. MrAdams

    MrAdams Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RE: hi

    good-evening $$RICH$$,


    surfing the net and checking out poems...


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    Mellow in play of our delight
    as the mood is now right
    searching your unique nakedness
    in da trench of enhancement joy

    I pray for morrow direction
    and feel the core of ya compassion
    as it lead us in forever affection
    coz my love is from above Ressurection
    ==
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    you have did it again, as i could picture the poet that is known as $$RICH$$ literally offering thy soul/mind/body when it comes to that special lady... oddly enough daydreaming of the good times while in her company, yet realizing it's REALITY... if only more men would show emotion when it comes to being trutful to thy mate... in all continue to write MR. LOVE POET!!


    have a nice night...


    sincerely,
    c.t.adams-///
     
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