Black Poetry : Da Mobb in Me--peace QB--

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  1. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    each day G-O-D lay life on my doorstep
    i see the world with older eyes
    confident my worries ain't really explained yet
    the pain remains so does my will to survive
    from where i been framed opportunity
    look like a set up
    rather stay in the crib
    get up on propa paper wit yo boys moms and kids
    throwin my talents to be you
    someone swept up unda paper
    with the faces of haters
    laughin when i take my last breath
    i put on my cap
    ain't even took a bath yet
    concentratin on bringing my class back
    with mad facts
    my visions diluted with truths of racism
    a corrupted government with a killa system
    i walk tall with smooth rhythm
    my people gotta knew what i give im
    my heart panics cause of improperly
    used wisdom
    but on that note i'm just a shorty
    neva blessed with the numb fingas of coke
    i done rolled bolos and drank fortys
    prob'bly a reason
    cause now killins outta season
    the entrapment of a whole people
    now thats too lethal
    hard to measure
    a lot of righteousness
    has to do with how we all live illegal
    breakin down our lives
    to please an assailant
    no justice
    it's insulting
    i'm impressed when i give my life for my folks
    only to physically produce nothin
    they must think i'm bluffin
    metaphysical facts
    i walk the lines that parallel religion
    spiritual dimensions
    make it so hard to pay attentions
    time layed on the table
    make meals however i'm able
    tears over my physical
    how to save you
    the powers that be wish to enslave you
    that's what hate do
    suck up the soul and lifeforce
    to support their inner enemy
    can't even see he kin to me
    power, money, hungry
    for an illusion
    these people steady losin
    my people weary for the steps they choosin
    i done walked the same
    fast forward
    i'm a warrior Secret Soldia
    refinin my weapon
    turnin over and over in the flame
    preparin to aim a-gain
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice scribing flow on
     
  3. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx $$Rich$$

    ai-ight...

    wurd

    OneLov

    /antar
     
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    Antar,
    This verse is full and overflowing.
    much message and commentary.
    enjoyed the read

    Peace and Blessings
     
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    I agree with Rasheed, this piece was brimming with knowledge, flow on.
     
  6. angelicsage

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    this was def' deep...
    powerful from beginning
    to end...def' got me thinkin
    this was tyte Antar...
    Flow on...you've got
    my attention!
     
  7. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    -thanx-

    i'm reall glad ya'll felt that, i push to give the best of me

    Rasheed - man, i ain't got nuttin to say... just real glad that i can be a vessel to reveal the truth. one

    Watzinaname - thanks yo. i'm glad that this path in this world i walk is not to no avail. our existence is so sacred.

    Angelicsage - it's not just my duty to flow live and direct to you...it's my pleasure.

    One love
    /antar
     
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