Black Poetry : Da meadow i pray

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    When i'm in the meadow
    right outside my own spirit
    i sit in silents of prayer
    nurturing GOD'S wonderful
    gift leaping ova walls of
    uncaging my soul in blessing
    my prayer whistle is da moment
    floating air bound unto the
    windz as i glaze into the sky
    and stare as the moon smile
    and the exsistance of hope
    embrace me my heart bloom
    like the many flowers dat arise
    from thou blessing art the axe
    GOD'S wonderful privilege guide
    me into a sharper focus
    uprooting deeply rooted
    harmony of life and people
    as we all join handz of multi
    colors & creed as one whole
    the prayer swoop behind the
    friction image bringing forth
    a melody & healthy twigs
    my spirit start to walk
    as i turn softly a kiss of
    windz comfort me can
    carry me above the mountain
    yet low enough to river in the
    depth of the valley
    nothing has equaled to his tone
    O' what a liberty unity within
    as the living reveals what a
    grand and great freedom
    beside me i ask cometh !
    in pray unto thou father
    undying change for the people
    now is the time we uproot
    da ideas & power from the
    grassy blade of sorrow & pain
    to rejoice in the frame of promises
    cometh !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This poem emits such a positive outlook, hence the feeling of hope upon hope. It's wondrous what God can bring. Such an uplifting piece.
     
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    yes indeed inside da Meadows i pray in hope
    GOD is good ....Thank u watz
     
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    I liked this. I don't think I've ever seen this side of you and I like it. No, I love it. Rich, you did an amazing job on this joint. Much luv and blessing for this piece.
     
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    Thank u sistah foxi................
    as a poet i bring many faces at times
    ya words & support means a lot
     
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    Yes, we can safely and surely say that you are indeed a "Universal" man. I do believe that sometimes instead of controlling your pen, there are those "every now and then" times...when the pen takes full control. So sweet the sound of your pens...
     
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    yes my pen can be very controling at times i found to love it
    however the ink drop it release a art of birth to canvas
    thank u so much for feeling me sistah
     
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    all i can say is this touch me and i love it........Angel
     
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    happy it was able to move u in a sweet way and a bless one too
    Thankz sistah Angel
     
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    the meadow outside my own spirit......$$RICH$$, that is an amazin line. This piece is so wonderful and warm and full of hope. I love, love the vision you laid out. :kiss:
     
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